| "Faithful" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: ObsidianButterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2010 20:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Who needs yaoi when you write such lovely shounen-ai? This was very nice... great POV too.
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Reviewed By: zetsuai2005 On: May 05, 2010 23:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was short, sweet, and poignant. I loved the characterization of Yohji, and blew out a breath when Aya smiled. This story touched and thrilled me, in a quiet, secret way. Well done!
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Reviewed By: Cierzo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2010 15:44 CST
Comment/Review:
I liked the external POV very much ^^. The declaration of faithfulness is all the more sweet for coming from Yohji, I think.
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2010 20:40 CST
Comment/Review:
This is sooo sweet! Getting Yohji to settle down and declare true faithfulness, I can understand why his fangirls mourn his playboy ways. this was very cute. thanks for brightening my day! ^_^
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