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| "The Saiyan King and the Lunarian Queen" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Anemos15 On: July 31, 2003 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am sorry. I messed up on a part of me review. On the part of where i said hit the bitrth of Princess Serena and the next two sentences. I meant for Chibi Vageta and Princess Serena to meet in the future. Sorry if you got confused. I will review sometime soon as I check for more chapters. Maybe you can leave some reviews for me to read and respond. But this weekend (look at date) I will be busy with some publishers but I will reply as soon as I can. See ya. :) ;) ^.~ Bye. | Reviewed By: Anemos15 On: July 31, 2003 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello, You are in luck today. I am an author and I just got done reading this and i reallllllyyyy like it. It has depth and details that can catch the attention of a non-anime lover. I salute you on makeing this sory because i have looked everywhere for this kind of story. and I would like to see more chapters in the future. Good job on writing this and I hope you do continue writing this. When i started reading I thought that when you hit the birth of Princess Serena (Serenity) you would have had something happen to the king and queen. And in the future the two meet and accidently fall in love and have Luna tell them that they are brother and sister. Well that's what i thought would have done. But anyways keep on writing the chapters your doing a great job and keep it up. You are really lucky to have an author be reading this. Even though I love anime you are really good at writing the stories. Maybe in the future if you become an anime author you and i can meet. Maybe. And yes i am an anime author. I also write teenage books. Who says Authors can't like anime? |
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