| "Almost Perfect" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: slancaster13 On: July 12, 2005 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
...When reviewing what is a "Title"? Anyways...I love your story. If anyone took the time to get to know both the siblings they'd see how much they really are alike. Lol. This story really is good the only thing I have to say is watch out for punctuation. *mutters about being worse than anyone else in that department* PLEASE POST SOON!
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Reviewed By: Thorn On: August 24, 2003 15:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Never reviewed before....the higher the number the better right? well if thats true then what I gave you, you deserve. this is a great fic. im looking forward to more chapters. |
Reviewed By: Piccolo'sVampire Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good please update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Blood Cat On: June 10, 2003 22:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
E-mail me at Nophonenow@aol.com Mybe we can do a fic. Check out one of my sily fics on Blood Cat
Miyuki |
Reviewed By: Blood Cat On: June 10, 2003 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
UP-DATE!!! UP-DATE!!! YP-DATE!!! (cahnts) That's what yuo have to do! AND SOON!!! I wanna see what happens...(wines) Will you fast forward it to the prt where they have the Dark Turnment? I REALLY wanna see it? Will Kali go on the missions withYuske? YES! YES SHE WILL!!! (It's an order NOT an option)
I REALY love your fic!!!
I like Mari too!!! Write about her!!!
Miyki |
Reviewed By: Matoko Shizaki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2002 11:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very nice Kali! You've been working on this I can see. I just can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: animej [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2002 18:41 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH COME ON!!!! YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!! *cries a lot* PLEEEEEEEAAAAASSSSEEEEE
WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!! This is SOOOOOOO exciting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pweese? ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Matoko Shizaki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2002 08:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love the part where Kali knocks Yusuke down! LOL! His first defeat. |
Reviewed By: Matoko Shizaki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2002 15:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hearing that Yusuke has a twim sister that's so unlike him is pretty cool. Maybe Kali can turn the Urameshi's bummed out life around...oh and, just curious, does she date Kuwabara-kun? That would be soooo cool!
I think Kuwabara diserves a girl more than Kurama and Hiei. Kurama's okay but I can't really stand Hiei. I'm definetly his worst fan. KK. BYE! |
Reviewed By: Matoko Shizaki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2002 15:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Kali, since I can't IM you I'll tell you here: I added a 5th chapter onto my fic Love and Hate. |
