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Reviewed By: Punkrock_grl92 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2010 04:36 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is interesting so far. Can't wait for the next chapter, but I noticed quite a few spelling mistakes... And I think you meantioned Miroku living in a hut in the 1st chapter and now he lives in an appartment? I'm a little confused on whether this is a modern setting or not... It still has a few Feudal elements like the market in the first chapter and Inu's cell, but then there's modern stuff like cars as well... Anyway, update soon, please :)
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2010 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOO KAGOME!! jk wow i wonder what happened to her?? PLz update soon also is there going to be more romance involved..
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Reviewed By: kagome 434 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2010 10:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this Story and i hope you update soon its really good!!! Hope inuyasha gets to kagome soon!
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2010 13:44 CDT
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Very interesting story and well written. Noticed a few spelling mistakes so i recommend rereading and correcting them but other than that I cant wait for the next chapter...keep it up...I wonder why Kagome doesnt talk...hmmmm Cant wait for the update XD
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2010 00:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic.. some early loving showing cute,, :)
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