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| "Garrulous and Gritless" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: hjfbj On: August 26, 2011 14:57 EDT
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Your last chapter, not the current one, was a repost. Shouldn't it be vegetas pov? Nice story | Reviewed By: FuzzyToad On: June 29, 2011 08:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely amazing! I loved it start to finish. Can't wait for the second installment. I love the characters perspectives and how well the conversations fit them. I also like the fact that the chapters are the perfect length; short enough that I can get through one after a long day without fear of having to sit for an hour, but not so short I feel jipped and left wanting(though I always want more...from a good story!) Great piece of fiction! | Reviewed By: Logical Paradox On: June 23, 2011 10:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really cool story, and really creative too. I'm not sure if I have yet to see a Bulma/Raditz fanfic. Also I love your writing style, it's funny, and I could really imagine the characters thinking the sort of things you write. The only drawback, which is probably just my own preference, is the every other chapter from Gohan's POV. It's not necessarily bad or anything, but it does seem to be a little "extra". Still, there is nothing else in the story I could really complain about because over all it is just AWESOME. | Title: Love IT!
Reviewed By: Zakirya On: April 10, 2011 09:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this on Fanfiction and now that I see it on this site, I am hooked! I love how uncesored the site lets you be with your story! I can't wait for the nxt update! 4rm da blk chick$$$ | Reviewed By: FuzzyToad On: January 28, 2011 01:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way this story is going, it's nice to see a plot that keeps Raditz in the mix. I also like seeing the characters true to form, you've done a great job exploring their personalities while keeping them who they are. Can't wait to see the future developments, keep it up! |
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