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"Sailor Moon Online II: SAO Shippuden" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: hornofdesolation [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 05, 2016 06:56 PST
Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. I didn't stop any glaring errors in grammar or typos like in chapter 1.
 Reviewed By: hornofdesolation [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 03, 2016 19:11 PST
Comment/Review:
Good 1st chapter but you accidentally typed that Xexeed hadn't eaten in 2 years which I'm certain is a typo since there's no record I could find after a quick search of anyone surviving near that long with just water. There might be other errors but that's the only 1 I saw since I wasn't looking too closely.

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