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Reviewed By: supersaiyaman On: July 12, 2009 11:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
i would very much like it if you were to write a sequelll to this story.as to how trunks moves on with his life.i was thinking after his doughter left the first time that mabe it was trunks doughter.
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Reviewed By: supersaiyaman On: July 12, 2009 11:39 CDT
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wow i hope pan the one he loves or did lopve still loves him.evry outher fanfict iv red iv neaver sean this kind of negative reaction and hatred. i would think that they would be happy that pan has found someone she truly loves.
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Reviewed By: supersaiyaman On: July 12, 2009 11:25 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
so her parents and trumnks perants will find out about them being together.how does that land trunks in what i now belive be be jail. your words are very well wretten. and right now youv got me intrested in why trunksis in jail becuse he and pamn fell in love. i hope the story has a happpy ending for them
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Reviewed By: supersaiyaman On: July 12, 2009 10:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
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i wonder ho is talking to trunks and were they are talking.what are the cercumstancese that led him to be were he is now.
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Reviewed By: supersaiyaman On: July 12, 2009 09:58 CDT
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i think its weird that you are having trunks relay the story to someone else.i wonder were youh are going with this fanfict.
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My name is Jumperjacket and I have to say. Back before I actually had an account I went by the name ShiningDosamon, and I believe I reviewed this already, too lazy to check. This story is still one of the greatest out there and it was still able to move me to tears. This story was an inspiration to me and I spent the whole night trying to find it again. I hope whereever yoou are right now you can read this, because I'd like to thank you from the bottom of my heart. If not for this I wouldn't hav been as good as I am now.
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Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 22:43 CDT
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I just read this story yesterday, and I spent all the morning thinking about your story. First of all, I must say I agree with you: Trunks and Pan is never gonna happen. Although a part of me wishes that could happen, the author (Toriyama-san) is clear at the end of DBGT about how Pan's descendants are not Vegeta's descendants. Anyway, I really enjoyed reading your story even when I disagree in some issues. For example, I'm sure that Bulma and her family would never leave Trunks to rot in jail. Maybe they would be angry, very angry, but they would make it through and stay by his side. Anyway, I do understand all of this was necessary in order to make the story work, and it did well. I would vote for you for "best Trunks characterization", given the plot. Ok, I guess I'll read some more of your stuff (I'd been loving them so far), then I'll let you know.
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Reviewed By: fighter x On: March 25, 2007 05:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story it's the most original fanfic that I have ever read and I really like the intelligent style of writing I think you should go professional. Sorry my name is usually ShiningDosamon but for some strange reason I can't use it ^_^
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Title: Beautiful...
Reviewed By: Animeheart [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2006 19:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm speechless. your story is incredible...and so well organized. All the pieces came together. I wouldn't mind a sequel.
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Reviewed By: Kimberly On: July 27, 2003 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was so sad, i cried like at the last part! damn it was so sad, i would have liked it though if you at least made it a real TP, like as in they got together in the end, but that's ok. i actually like it like that because it makes the story more interseting. |
Reviewed By: FireyxAngel07 On: July 25, 2003 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! It's beautiful and I think it is a MAJOR lesson learned. I know that Trunks sleeps around and he's a bit devious, but he learned a lesson and loved someone finally. I normally don't read P/T's unless Trunks gets in trouble for it or what not. Hehe. This was so nice and well written. Girl, I loved everything. I nearly cried! Yes, I know kind of sad in both meanings of the word. Hehe! You're awesome, Girl! Keep up at the great work! |
Reviewed By: v son sayain On: May 15, 2003 17:20 CDT
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awwwwmit was so cute an' so sad i love it it's so good that it don't need a sequel |
Reviewed By: Lost Book On: April 04, 2003 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was astounding. Truly beautiful. I don't even read fics on mediaminer, but someone posted a link to yours and I read it and loved it. I only wish it was longer ^_^
- Lost Book
soshinkyu4@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: Amy On: March 25, 2003 10:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THis was absoloutly beautiful! It's classic. Very sad, but very great! |
Reviewed By: bachnelkenwurz On: January 07, 2003 08:30 CST
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I hate them all now for leaving Trunks alone, when he needed them. And common twenty years??!!!For loving a 15 year old girl. Oh, how I hate them now. Poor Trunks! They don't deserve you. You see how emotionally I got through your ff. You did a great job! |
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