| "Zana-sei" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: Drag.zfan On: January 07, 2003 16:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I never seen a fic like this! |
Reviewed By: Drag.zfan On: January 07, 2003 16:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME!! Holla back!! I like this ,Every new chapter is better than the last, so keep it up! |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2002 03:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhhh evil making me think i was gonna be a lemon but it was only a dream. lol keep going it's great so far and thanks for the index of words at the end |
Reviewed By: Daniel of Lorien On: December 28, 2002 00:01 CST
Comment/Review:
cool... your story is most original... I love it! |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2002 21:45 CST
Comment/Review:
hehehehe! Will there be a lemon Please tell me there will be!!! |
Reviewed By: Kandrisa Alston On: December 25, 2002 23:42 CST
Comment/Review:
How Sweet! Just makes me all warm, and fuzzy inside. Congrats, on your baby! |
Reviewed By: Kandrisa Alston On: December 25, 2002 23:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Watching GI Joe. Big ugly snake. *lol* Really neat stuff. I have to say I got confused for a while, but I've decide not to think about. I'll just wait till YOU explain it. Way easier on the brain. Plus it's the holiday! |
Reviewed By: Addicted On: February 10, 2003 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You do know its been a MONTH SINCE YOU LAST UPDATED, RIGHT?!?! UPDATE NOW!!! THATS AN ORDER!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Vampkestrel On: December 11, 2002 20:49 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was unique if you write more i'll keep reading it. it does get a bit confusing in places do you think at the end of a chapter you could add a translation of some of the words that buruma and the other girls use that would help a lot |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2002 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I KNOW I read chapter8 because I remember it. That cave sounds lovely! (and a neat location for some ... "developments" as you call them *heh*) Are the blue stones sapphires, a neato mineral, or something? Just curious, I like stuff like that.
And no matter WHAT universe he's in, Vegeta STILL gets to train in high gravity!! Alright! :D
*chuckles* He ate her fish. Bad boy! AHA!! So he knows that their probably bonded (albeit an accident) and knows that he's only a bonded Saiyan and can therefore last SO long before ... well, here come those "developments" again. ^_~
*he he he* (yes, I'm a lemon freak and I can almost sense one coming--eventually;) Well, the last two chapters were really great--still creative as always! And don't worry about being a slow updater. (heh, I'm worse!!) I have faith that you'll update with another wonderful chapter ... sooner or later--but sooner is acceptable!! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2002 06:50 CST
Comment/Review:
This chapter was great! Please, pretty please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Natsumi On: November 20, 2002 08:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story so far, VERY original, hurry up and get the next chapter out soon ^_^! |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, I finally got to read chapter 10! (I've been busy too:)
I've got to say . . . I think this was my favorite chapter so far! Why? Well, for one I think your beta reader is doing a wonderful job! (hats off) And . . . I like fics where dreams mix with reality. It's just so E--vil!!! ;)
*sniffles* So she (sorta) knows about Freiza now? *sniff* He's such a bastard!! Poor Vegeta/Bulma...
*smirks* Heh heh heh . . . I wish that last dream were reality. *wink*
Well, this story is still awesome and it just keeps getting better and better with each new chapter! So ... take it easy and get the important stuff done ... then you can study for your tests! *lol* j/k Tests come first. So, after you get A's ... THEN you absolutely MUST write another wonderful installment of Zana-sei.
*chuckles* Take care! ^_^ (OH, I'm going to email you later so I can join your update list, k?) |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2002 21:57 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Snake!!!! *lol* How cool. Well, it sure took him long enough to find out that they think he's a woman! :) heh I can't WAIT to find out what Bulma's gonna do to that "snake." I mean, there's only so much that COULD happen with a snake, a scared woman, and a spear!! Poor Vegeta. ^_~
OH ... and what did Surayah do to Vegeta? Splash him? Dunk him? Steal his clothes?? *lol* |
Reviewed By: Akimi Hime On: November 08, 2002 15:47 CST
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HAHAHA poor vegeta, i would be so embarassed if i was him. ohh but i forgot veggie has no modesty anyway chapter seven made me laugh everyone at my house was staring at me. You have to update soon please!!!!!! thanies
Akimi |
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