| "Zana-sei" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2002 21:57 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Snake!!!! *lol* How cool. Well, it sure took him long enough to find out that they think he's a woman! :) heh I can't WAIT to find out what Bulma's gonna do to that "snake." I mean, there's only so much that COULD happen with a snake, a scared woman, and a spear!! Poor Vegeta. ^_~
OH ... and what did Surayah do to Vegeta? Splash him? Dunk him? Steal his clothes?? *lol* |
Reviewed By: Akimi Hime On: November 08, 2002 15:47 CST
Comment/Review:
HAHAHA poor vegeta, i would be so embarassed if i was him. ohh but i forgot veggie has no modesty anyway chapter seven made me laugh everyone at my house was staring at me. You have to update soon please!!!!!! thanies
Akimi |
Reviewed By: crazyraditzlover On: October 26, 2002 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter! |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2002 18:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was great! What will the women do now? I must know!!! |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2002 20:23 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*sigh* I actually wrote this review when you first updated with the newest chapter but SOMEhow I never posted it. Gomen nasai!! -_- And I'm sorry for the severity of my last review. I was pretty narrow minded THAT day.
*reads IMPORTANT* -_- Once again my big mouth puts me in the hotseat. Yeah, I've heard of that African frog(thank you JurassicPark!:), but then wouldn't they have to still-- ah, nevermind. I'll just keep quiet while I'm ahead.
*lol* Well, I'm relieved that Chitula is ONLY a deity and not, oh, say ... some weird alien thinging that comes down and impregnates the women of Zana-sei in their sleep. *lmao* Damn, my insatiable imagination!!
O.O humina humina humina ... well, I don't know about Bulma, but if a VERY naked (!!) Vegeta walked out of the water toward me then I'd be checking ... well, for "little Vegeta." *heh* Of course, Bulma think's he's a woman so she won't look because she doesn't expect anything unusual. Uh ... did that make any sense??
Anyways ... I can't WAIT for another update!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2002 19:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was great, I gotta know how Bulma reacts!!! |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2002 23:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I only said "9" for the "Enjoyment Factor" for a couple reasons.
1, Daaaammmn. I never realized that Kakkarot and Nappa were so friggin dumb. *scratches head* Hm. *rereads your opening author notes* K/CC romance, huh? *shrugs* I'd like to see that, but Kakkarot is acting so dumb that I'd feel bad for poor Chi Chi. -_-
... and 2, (the most important reason) MORE V/B interaction!! *lol* Can you tell that I'm in a hurry to find out when "will Buruma see more of Vegeta then she ever expected?" Damn, her auburn haired friend Quesia is going too ... shucks!
Well, ignore my ravings because they're my screwed up opinions only. -_- |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2002 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good, so far. It's REALLY making me think-- I like that!! I can't WAIT until Bulma finds out that the's a man. "Man? What's a man?"
Speaking of which, how can they get pregnant without men? Sure, they need a "blessing" from Chitula, but ... exactly WHAT is Chitula?? Or is it like when Mary found found out she was carrying the son of god? (sorry for the bible reference -_-) Or are they being impregnated by something else? And why only with girls?
I'm wondering ... are they seeing each other's memories because Bulma licked his blood off of her hands?? Did they, well . . . "bond?" *grabs head* The pain, OH, the PAIN!!!
Keep writing because you've got my head exploding from all these unanswered questions ... which is a GOOD thing. ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Kristy On: October 04, 2002 10:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good and very original!!! I love it and hope you continue! |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2002 22:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was goo, when will Bulma find out that vegeta's a man!? O.o I must know! |
Reviewed By: rachael On: September 29, 2002 20:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
love it! |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2002 06:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is so awesome! Please update soon! Pretty Please! |
Reviewed By: bura400 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2002 01:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! MORE PLEASEEEEEEEE! SO very good!!! Bura-chan |
Reviewed By: rachael On: September 27, 2002 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, i've never seen a fic like this. great story! you write beautifully |
Reviewed By: crazyraditzlover On: September 30, 2002 14:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very original...i really like it |
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