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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Lunatea On: October 20, 2012 07:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm sad to see this end I was always looking forward for the next chapter. but either way thanks for the great story |
Reviewed By: OddFan On: September 15, 2012 04:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I take it your no longer writing sex scenes anymore? Granted I'm not complaining as it's an enjoyable chapter with a great plot twist. |
Reviewed By: PBallPsycho [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2012 20:33 EDT
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Glad to see you are back and updating again, and hope you keep up the good work. |
Title: Hope it continues
Reviewed By: ChaosLacky On: December 17, 2011 11:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great read. I hope you choose to continue this. |
Title: Thanks
Reviewed By: ChaosLacky On: August 28, 2010 03:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad you continued "The Shuffle" again. It has been my favorite one of your stories, likely because it is more adventure based. If you could update it on Digiartist Domain there are plenty of fans there also that would enjoy it. (It only has up to the "Pure Knowledge" chapter.)
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Reviewed By: FruitloopTrooper On: June 27, 2010 15:14 EDT
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'I said it would it take a while. Just didn't think it'd take this long.' You do realize that was three years ago, right? Glad to see you updated this story. It still feels weird how 'easily' everyone kind of adjusted to their children switching homes, but maybe that's just their way of coping. It'll be interesting to see how the Mimi thing plays out. Hope you updated a little sooner.
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: Lord Patamon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2010 14:57 EDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting, hope Tailmon is dating Patamon, if not I hope it is Wizardmon if he is back. But I go more with Patamon, he has been there for her more than any other ^^ That and I liked how you worked Tailmon and Patamon as couple in Red Digivice Diaries ^^
Diaa |
Reviewed By: Fruitlooptrooper On: April 07, 2007 17:59 EDT
Comment/Review:
Well, it's been a long time since we talked about this, so I don't know if you remember that I wasn't too happy about Taichi and Sora staying stuck in each others bodies. I've been in a debate with a few people over cloning, so forgive me if this sounds too Metaphysical but I hope in further chapters you at least explore Hikari's feelings about having a fake brother. I'm sure Sora's going to be as 'Taichi' as she can be, but she's not going to be Taichi, a person is who they are because of their inner being, not because of memories that can be stored in brain cells. Memories can easily be altered, a person's soul cannot. Taichi will always be Taichi, even in Sora's body, Sora will always be Sora, even in Taichi's body. I personally think it would be better if Sora still lived as Sora, just in Taichi's body, and vice-versa... ...though, if they don't adapt right away, it would be funny to see Taichi's temper get the better of him while trying to deal with an annoying customer at the flower shop, or Sora trying to play soccer, but still thinking she's playing tennis. I do have a few plot ideas if you'd care to hear them, and since I'm not too sure about Mediaminer's policy about that kind of stuff in the reviews page, I can e-mail them to you if you'd want. Anyway, great as always, I hope you continue with this soon. Too often body-switching stories fall into Over-done clichés, but this is different, and I am enjoying reading it. Peace out.
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Reviewed By: FruitloopTrooper On: March 31, 2007 19:05 EDT
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If you're going to end this how I think you're going to end this, I think it would have been a better idea to keep Daisuke as Mimi. Still great to see you updating this again. Hope to read the next chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 01:05 EDT
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I couldn't believe my eyes! Great to see that you're still out and about as far as writing goes. Cheers to you! As for the chapter itself, great job - its good to see that your writing ability hasn't diminished in the span of time between updates. Keep it up! d('')b
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Reviewed By: Fruitloop Trooper [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 10:51 EDT
Comment/Review:
Great to see that you're still writing this. I hope you continue soon...although I'm wondering about how many Chosen are switching back. Are you still going with your original plan, or are they all going to switch back? Anyway, keep up the good work.
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Title: good
Reviewed By: jagball57 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2005 18:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the reson i gave tis a 7 is cuse u did patamons ultimate form holy angemon its reall magna angemon i love this thought its pretty cool bt shall get confusing
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Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 23:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Greretings, tis I again. Again, i complement you on your story here. Interesting concept by the way, and you have done a splendid job portraying it. If there is anything I could complain about, there would only be one thingn and that thing is understandable. Updating stories regularly would be wonderful. However, i realise that getting a story like this and crafting it into a caliber of high quality as you have done takes time. In all honestly, this is not a complaint but a hope. I sincerely hope you can update more regularly, but all is understood should there be reason for delay. Congratulations on another high-caliber story. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 23:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Greretings, tis I again. Again, i complement you on your story here. Interesting concept by the way, and you have done a splendid job portraying it. If there is anything I could complain about, there would only be one thingn and that thing is understandable. Updating stories regularly would be wonderful. However, i realise that getting a story like this and crafting it into a caliber of high quality as you have done takes time. In all honestly, this is not a complaint but a hope. I sincerely hope you can update more regularly, but all is understood should there be reason for delay. Congratulations on another high-caliber story. Keep it up!
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Title: lala
Reviewed By: sweety On: November 23, 2004 11:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey-ho! I didnt quite get it with who is going to fail and who not if one doesnt fail, but still I LOVE READING THIS! so please update soonadn pretty please make it a Taiora *puppydogeyesmake* Hope, I can read the next chapie soon, bussi, your sweety ()() =^-^= o(ö)(ö) ps: I gave u a 10 on everything so please make it a TAIORA! :P
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