Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 14:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was sweet. Really really sweet. Don't worry about it, I understand the the story perfectly, the POV's aren't quite confusing. The style was good, giving the other a some space to think about.
They're no misspelled words in here, just a few misused ones, but that's not too bad.
Yes, I've really enjoyed it. It was sweet. |
