| "The Final Mission" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Wouldntulike2kno On: November 01, 2002 16:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been 2 years, so when will you continue this? |
Reviewed By: AllyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2002 14:52 CST
Comment/Review:
I like the actual story, but you might want to edit a bit more. It's kinda distracting to try and read through spelling and grammar mistakes. but I still like it. |
Reviewed By: Cali_Co On: September 06, 2001 18:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
i like it, the languge kind of others me, ut its not half bad. |
