| "How, Why?" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Kalen On: October 16, 2002 16:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
i liked it...i finally got done reading it! i started a few times but then i stopped cause the damned ppl IMing me! but all in all it was good and i liked it! YAY!!! lol but anyways....u damned pervert! stop writing nasty stories! :-P lol anyways im out...and kids dont forget to lube up ur cock and balls with tanning oil. and always remember to share ur cock and balls with ur brother..cause u arent usin em! :p bye bye |
Reviewed By: Legana On: October 14, 2002 07:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, nice fic =)
lemon could be better though, little more detailed and longer. |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2002 16:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was good, but the lemon could have been a little more, but I liked this anyway. XD |
Reviewed By: VegetaPuff On: October 10, 2002 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For some odd reason, this seems like a major De Ja Vu..... I wonder why? ::thinks yeah right:: well anyways, you finally posted it! yay! now all you have to do is finish writing all of your others.... yes it was good, even Lucas thinks so... Lucas! stop attacking Vegeta! bad elf! BAD ELF! ::drags Lucas away:: I can't take you anywhere..... um.... now that that's over, bye Baka Hentai! |
Reviewed By: LizzardGizzard [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2002 15:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry I don't have much lemon, but I was actually keeping it on the low-low for my friends. Now that they have read it, I will make it long, and more detailed, so no worries! :D |
Reviewed By: RisinIndeed On: October 10, 2002 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mna update allready it really killing me |
Reviewed By: RisinIndeed On: October 10, 2002 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mna update allready it really killing me |
Reviewed By: RisinIndeed On: October 10, 2002 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mna update allready it really killing me |
Reviewed By: RisinIndeed On: October 10, 2002 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mna update allready it really killing me |
