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| "Happy Birthday, Baby" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] | Title: To Beautiful
Reviewed By: Alaskanbeauty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 16:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have never read a story with more passion and love in my life and the ache I felt for Gojyo when Hakkai was taken from him made my heart break, I truly cried hard over that and the joy I felt when they found each other again. I know this was written in 2002 and it is a shame it never continued, you are the most incredible writer I have come across you are truly gifted and I do hope you continue.
| Reviewed By: Sayoko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2006 22:13 CDT
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E-sama's fiction led me to like Saiyuki, as i ended up actually LOOKING for signs of affection between Sha Gojyo and Cho Hakkai. @_@; You'll be glad to know that my searching is mostly gratified. LoL. Long live Shounen Ai/Yaoi! (Man, I'm a freak). Well, keep writing. Uh, is Sanzo in love with Hakkai or Gojyo? Why's he so worked up about those two?
| Reviewed By: nickiy On: June 22, 2004 03:58 CDT
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I really love your stories. I'v read almost all of them in a really weird order but it doesn't matter. Went to the ends of the world looking for all of your fics hehe. Your stories got me into a major obsession with hakkaixgojyo stuff. But since i read yours first i enjoy your stories the most.
| Reviewed By: ni On: May 23, 2004 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This sucks like a sucky thing. In fact my vaccum cleaner sucks less than this writer's fic.
| Reviewed By: Jan Brown On: March 08, 2004 18:41 CST
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Fans self... just read chapter 4...my ooh my.... wonderful build up...really nice lemony goodness..it's so nice to see a loving caring relationship that builds upon itself...sigh...and did I mention I liked the lemon...^_~...gotta go turn the AC up and cool off....thanks for a great read! >walks away...fanning self and heading for the AC...humming happily< g
| Reviewed By: Jan Brown On: March 07, 2004 18:57 CST
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Finally I can leave a review! I just started reading your fiction and love it! I just finished reading "Fateful Encounters" which was wonderful! I tried to leave a review, but discovered you had to go through all kinds of gyrations to get one posted. I was glad to see the system changed with this story arc...I wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed that story...it filled in so many gaps...and I like the references made to both Kenren and Tenpou..I am relatively new to Saiyuki and it took me awhile to figure out who was who...but I digress..I enjoy your work...your characterizations are wonderful...your slow buildup in the dynamics of the various relationships was well done...I loooooooooove long well-written stories (by the way, Chapter 19 of Fateful Encounters couldn't be pulled up...might be a minor glitch, there...I initially discovered you at fanfiction.net and am so glad you mentioned all your stuff was posted here..I like stories all in one location...but now not only am I digressing, I am babbling! I will now to to Chapter 2..I intend to leave a lot of reviews...^_^ (PS..I can't help but comment on the apparent viciousness of Candor...It is a shame that some folks try to destroy anothers joy in their craft...if that person doesn't agree with the way you write...then that person should find something that they do enjoy...instead of trying to force their own perspective in such a manner that is not constructive criticism but just plain meanness! I am sorry this person seems to think it is ok to act in such a manner...obviously that individual is jealous of you.... until next time....Keep it coming...and thanks for such wonderful stories!
| Reviewed By: Destinys Lot On: March 03, 2004 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
| Reviewed By: guardian of jupiter On: November 26, 2003 05:07 CST
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Hi, alright, prepare yourself to read a long rambling from me... ^_^ Before I start, I just want you to know that I have read all your fanfiction, start from Fateful Encounter (my favorite and I put it on my favorite list on fanfiction.net) until the (I guess) newest one called Shattering. Now only have I the time to drop in a review about your work. * smile sheepishly * :p I intend to write a review worth all of your wonderful efforts on writing such an enjoyable saga about Gojyo and Hakkai that I have ever read and I hope this one did. First, Fateful Encounter I like the way you slowly build the relationship between my favorite bishounens. It kept me on track on how their emotions and thoughts about each other. Unlike some fictions that I've read (nothing in particular just something I ran across to and read) the emotion-building was to fast pace and I was suddenly baffled when they blurted "I love you". I know you have come across fiction like that. Then, I am practicaly amazed when I noticed how detail you are when it comes to describing certain things. Like Gojyo's drink preferance, Hakkai's thought over little things like the soil sheets (that one managed to make my eyes went wide), Gojyo's habit of wandering around shirtless (Gojyo can hint so blatantly and he can be so vain sometimes, which is why I'm so in love with him ^_^), even Hakkai's uneasiness of imposing Gojyo so much (which is so thpically Hakkai) Those little things make me go "WOW HOLY SH*T!!! How can I not review this HOITD*MN stories!! (Pardon the *'s) But then your stories are so long and I've just gotta read the whole thing before I can review properly. I even went to mediaminer just to read Happy Birthday, Baby and I just went wild with the way the story flows!! On to Happy Birthday, Baby Are actually have done this because your lemon is so juicy!!! (heh, it is not that often to read lemon story about them, not this good anyway) Sanzo is sooo Sanzo. I mean you got him exactly what I thought Sanzo would react over Gojyo and Hakkai relationship. I never thought Hakuryuu would be so considerate and supportive (this story changes my perspective about Hakuryuu's role. I just saw him as a jeep :P ) Their realtionship changes quite steadily from the last time you left them in Fateful Encounter (FE). Judging from the way you wrote FE, I know that you would not jump into a immediate love scene (not that I'm complaining ^_~) I have to tell you that I looooooooove the way you write the difficulty they faced and the sensitive side of Gojyo. (I know he has one!!!) I love it!!! And lastly Shattering Ooh, this one left me shaking non stop. It is so full of angst and sadness and heart-breaking scenes and frustration and I soooo love it. You know my favorite part? The part when Hakkai regains his memories and apologizes to Gojyo!!!!! Yaaay!!! (That's what I scream when I was reading it ^_^) It makes me wanna scream "WHY THE F*CK*ING H*LL ISN'T GOJYO MY BOYFRIEND???!!!!" (Again pardon the the *'s :p ) Gojyo was apologizing too, that is way too sweet and Hakkai should very well appreciate Gojyo!! Sanzo was handling his pride very well. I love it. He managed not being an *ssh*le and yet sounded every inch like Sanzo I watch on anime. You've got the *talent*. No, I'm not just saying it. You've got the *talent* and you share it with me!!! I really love it. Alright to end my babbling. (I'm sure you're bored anyway ^_~) Most people can't handle the long, serious and angsty fictions. They tend to look for short, humorous and fluffy. (I like fluffy too!!!) But I absolutely love those things. The more the angsty the better, especially when it concerned about my favorite bishounens. I hope you keep on writing about them because I'm telling you this, NOBODY WRITES LIKE YOU DO. Suggestion (If I may be so bold): Why don't you write what actually happen to Tenpou and Kenren during the Gaiden. You keep on hinting about it in your saga and sometimes I thought you will inserted in one of the chapters. It is just a suggestion. I think it will be so d*mn great!!! P/S: I'll post this in mediaminer and ff.net. I'm posting this again. Even I'm getting confuse with the format... Finally... Luv, Guardian of Jupiter
| Reviewed By: guardian of jupiter On: November 26, 2003 05:00 CST
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Hi, alright, prepare yourself to read a long rambling from me... ^_^ Before I start, I just want you to know that I have read all your fanfiction, start from Fateful Encounter (my favorite and I put it on my favorite list on fanfiction.net) until the (I guess) newest one called Shattering. Now only have I the time to drop in a review about your work. * smile sheepishly * :p I intend to write a review worth all of your wonderful efforts on writing such an enjoyable saga about Gojyo and Hakkai that I have ever read and I hope this one did. First, Fateful Encounter I like the way you slowly build the relationship between my favorite bishounens. It kept me on track on how their emotions and thoughts about each other. Unlike some fictions that I've read (nothing in particular just something I ran across to and read) the emotion-building was to fast pace and I was suddenly baffled when they blurted "I love you". I know you have come across fiction like that. Then, I am practicaly amazed when I noticed how detail you are when it comes to describing certain things. Like Gojyo's drink preferance, Hakkai's thought over little things like the soil sheets (that one managed to make my eyes went wide), Gojyo's habit of wandering around shirtless (Gojyo can hint so blatantly and he can be so vain sometimes, which is why I'm so in love with him ^_^), even Hakkai's uneasiness of imposing Gojyo so much (which is so thpically Hakkai) Those little things make me go "WOW HOLY SH*T!!! How can I not review this HOITD*MN stories!! (Pardon the *'s) But then your stories are so long and I've just gotta read the whole thing before I can review properly. I even went to mediaminer just to read Happy Birthday, Baby and I just went wild with the way the story flows!! On to Happy Birthday, Baby Are actually have done this because your lemon is so juicy!!! (heh, it is not that often to read lemon story about them, not this good anyway) Sanzo is sooo Sanzo. I mean you got him exactly what I thought Sanzo would react over Gojyo and Hakkai relationship. I never thought Hakuryuu would be so considerate and supportive (this story changes my perspective about Hakuryuu's role. I just saw him as a jeep :P ) Their realtionship changes quite steadily from the last time you left them in Fateful Encounter (FE). Judging from the way you wrote FE, I know that you would not jump into a immediate love scene (not that I'm complaining ^_~) I have to tell you that I looooooooove the way you write the difficulty they faced and the sensitive side of Gojyo. (I know he has one!!!) I love it!!! And lastly Shattering Ooh, this one left me shaking non stop. It is so full of angst and sadness and heart-breaking scenes and frustration and I soooo love it. You know my favorite part? The part when Hakkai regains his memories and apologizes to Gojyo!!!!! Yaaay!!! (That's what I scream when I was reading it ^_^) It makes me wanna scream "WHY THE F*CK*ING H*LL ISN'T GOJYO MY BOYFRIEND???!!!!" (Again pardon the the *'s :p ) Gojyo was apologizing too, that is way too sweet and Hakkai should very well appreciate Gojyo!! Sanzo was handling his pride very well. I love it. He managed not being an *ssh*le and yet sounded every inch like Sanzo I watch on anime. You've got the *talent*. No, I'm not just saying it. You've got the *talent* and you share it with me!!! I really love it. Alright to end my babbling. (I'm sure you're bored anyway ^_~) Most people can't handle the long, serious and angsty fictions. They tend to look for short, humorous and fluffy. (I like fluffy too!!!) But I absolutely love those things. The more the angsty the better, especially when it concerned about my favorite bishounens. I hope you keep on writing about them because I'm telling you this, NOBODY WRITES LIKE YOU DO. Suggestion (If I may be so bold): Why don't you write what actually happen to Tenpou and Kenren during the Gaiden. You keep on hinting about it in your saga and sometimes I thought you will inserted in one of the chapters. It is just a suggestion. I think it will be so d*mn great!!! P/S: I'll post this in mediaminer and ff.net Finally... Luv, Guardian of Jupiter
| Reviewed By: Mina (kagekoku on LJ) On: November 07, 2003 22:09 CST
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While such things as "Dr. Doolittle" and Shakespeare seem incongruous...we don't really know what is incongruous for the "Saiyuki" universe. -_-;; Man, my brain hurts. On to the smut!
| Reviewed By: Mina (kagekoku on LJ) On: November 07, 2003 21:55 CST
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::fans self:: All right, we've got foreplay... Goujun in a voyeur. ^__^; And though *I* personally don't consider it IC, I'm much enjoying naive!Hakkai.
| Reviewed By: Mina (kagekoku on LJ) On: November 07, 2003 21:40 CST
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::laughs:: We tend not to leave reviews for "hentai" because no one wants to admit to enjoying a delicions sex-romp story every now and then. Face it, we're all hegemonically forced to think that sex=bad, so whether we like it or not in our *heads*, we can't admit to liking it out loud. Now that that's said, I'm off to totter through the rest.
| Reviewed By: Travellyr On: August 24, 2003 22:18 CDT
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mmm.... lemony goodness...
I want to thank you again, because I enjoyed this one very much, too. I woke up from the all-nighter reading "Fateful Encounters" and read this one.
I like this. I like your writing, except for the occasional word-arrangement thing. That's nothing to worry about- sort of like one decorator not being completely in tune with another's paint choice. I tend to have and am used to a different style, is all.
ahh... what nice lemons. *huge, hentai grin* what _very_ nice lemons. | Reviewed By: Naraku_74 On: August 18, 2003 04:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! the pairing GojyoxHakkai it's not my favourite one, but this ficci it's simply wonderful! So hot, so tender... I think this is probably the best yaoi fic I've ever read about this two bishounen. And what about the poor Sanzo!? please let me know if i'm allowed to translate your work in italian so that many other fans of the saiyuki boys could enjoy it (my e-mail is naraku_74@libero.it -please no spam and no troyans!!) | Reviewed By: faye_valentine28 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2003 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed your general idea and the concepts you tried to illustrate however I feel that they were not illustrated as well as they could have been. It seems that your style is all about long run-on sentences. For me, I get bored very quickly with this type of style. Although you did have tremendously descriptive words, the flow of thought is limited by your sentence structure and use of grammar. | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] |
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