| "A Fine Line" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 18, 2004 20:02 CST
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Wow! An update! Keep up the awesome job and update sooner!
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Reviewed By: shdwwrathe On: November 17, 2004 22:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is an excellent fic. I started reading it so long ago when you first started posting and have eagerly awaited more parts. I even went back and reread the entire thing it was so good. I can't wait for more chapters, hopefully a bit quicker this time though. Excellent writing.
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Reviewed By: sapphire1 On: August 20, 2004 15:49 CDT
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yay another chapter - i really hope it's not a year till the next one though - brillant as always and hope for more soon
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm loving this story and I especially love the very interesting plotline. Update soon! *|Mari|*
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Title: a fine line
Reviewed By: vegetrama On: October 14, 2003 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope U plan on completing this intriguing work of art, unless of course it's a saga, then that would be a treat. I love this fic and I have just joined the GW yaoi fandom. Keep Up the Good Work!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: August 09, 2003 09:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. I hope you update it soon. |
Reviewed By: Scorpio On: August 05, 2003 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent imagination and story line! Congratulations, please update soon^_^- |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2003 22:41 CDT
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What a pleasant surprise to see you've had a chance to update!
Vivian is a great OC. Between her airheaded appearance and chattering about Relena, to her stalking Duo (nice of Heero to point that out) - and the ice cream incident...she slays me!
The part where Quatre tries to get a read on Lindsey and then kind of...drifts off...adds yet another layer of intrigue. I do love a good mystery!
Thanks so much for your personal response to my last review. Never feel the need to answer my questions...sometimes I'm just "thinking aloud" but that shows you that I'm very caught up in the story! I really enjoy the suspense, and I'm sure if I were more patient with my reading, I'd pick up on some of the more subtle clues - but that's OK, because sometimes the story unfolding is even more enjoyable when I haven't figured something out on my own!
Nicely done, once again! |
Reviewed By: Datiye On: August 04, 2003 04:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey you, I really like your fic! I'm sorry I didn't reveiw earlier on but I just started reading it today. I really like the plot that you have developed. I am very interested to see what else Quatre gets from Lindsy and I can't wait to find out what her disorder is. Will you be letting us in a little on what Quatre read in her case study? (Can you tell I a psycology freak? hehe) Oh, and I am very happy with how you are handling Heero and Duo's budding relationship. I like how you are taking it slow and letting things develop instead of the usual fanfic style of "I have loved you since I met you but never had the guts to tell you so now that I have lets screw like bunny rabbits " aproach. Your style is much more realistic and much apriciated. Oh, and I will be looking up that stuff on the PBS website 'caue that is like one of my new favorite sites and I love being introduced to new and interesting information so thanks for that too. Anywayz, I hope to see more chapters soon and you can expect a reveiw from me every time I read one 'cause I love to give thought filled reveiws. Until next time, good luck and happy writing! |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 13:40 CDT
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i demand an update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i will destroy you if you fail to concede, and your little dog too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: sapphire On: June 29, 2003 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes it is me - yeah another chapter - not long enough - BUT THAT DOSN'T MATTER IT JUST MEANS THAT YOU ARE WRITING THIS AGAIN - so more creepy natasha and snake scott what to know what's with them - and more soon please |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 19:43 CDT
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I'm quite pleased that you are taking time to develop the relationship between Duo and Heero. The scene with Duo hiding under Heero's desk, though, that was too funny!
It was an interesting theory about Duo's survival of the L2 plague. Kudos to you for that one.
Of course other mysteries abound. Who was Scott talking to? What are his motives? What is Relena's secret? And of course, the vague hints of something between Wufei and Sally are amusing as well.
Overall I enjoy this story and look forward to more of it being revealed in the near future! |
Reviewed By: DuosDemi On: June 22, 2003 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No!!! You have to update soon. This is really good and you have me in suspense. Hey what's the deal with Wuffie being so mean to Duo. You know for some reason Natasha reminds me of Dorothy, guess it's their weirdness. Scott is gettin' a little to comfortable with Quatre, if you no what I mean wink, wink. Trowa should kick his sorry ass. Waht else can I say but 1x2! You should spice it up little more with them ^_^ OH and you rule of course!! |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 00:25 CDT
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rofl, yay for shrek!!! *contemplates the onion*
*coughs* _anyway_... i really like this, its an excellent story, the plot is great too. its always refreshing to find a fic with a really good plot as well as a great writing style.
i'm curious about scott though... i think he wants in quatre's pants, but i'm not quite sure, because he also seems like a bad guy *confused* poor trowa...
i want some insight on wufei too. it seems like he's got a beef with duo or something. maybe like just a short section on wufei's POV would be good.
but then again, this is your fic and you don't have to listen to me at all!!! if you did what all your reviewers wanted you too it would no longer be your own fic, and that's the beauty of writing fanfiction, its all yours!!
ja ne
Mara |
Reviewed By: ladyj On: May 01, 2003 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad this was finally updated!! I first read this on ffn and was depressed when I couldn't find it anywhere else.
Love where this story is going and can't wait for more |
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