| "Spiritual Fun" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: MORE!!!
Reviewed By: nameless author On: March 29, 2004 16:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE!!! this is hilarious. i wanna see more just cause how funny it is.
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Reviewed By: Moose Breath On: November 14, 2002 21:23 CST
Comment/Review:
Cute story; "Theatre Of The Absurd" without relying on Monty Python cliches.
Pleas dub bull Czech yore whirred yew sage, too many homonyms spoil the read without being funny.
Please either quit using MS Word as an HTML generator or at least LOOK at your stories after they have been posted. The non-standard HTML makes some of them TOTALLY unreadable; this one marginally so.
Please pick a spelling for any word that you are not sure of and stick to it.
I don't know where you can take this tale next, but that's a good thing. |
Reviewed By: NellNell On: November 07, 2002 17:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an awesome fic. But my friend and I were wondering what happens next. Pretty please with sugar on top make a second chapter. All right? Tanky tanky!^__^
NellNell |
Reviewed By: Kakaroto and "Cryptie" On: October 25, 2002 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Messed up. Pure and simple. (i.e. I loved it.) I agree with Rob about Koji being like Hawkeye. (Think you can have Koji make Ryoga crossdress like Klinger?) |
Reviewed By: ArchangelBloodraven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2002 00:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Gah... I've fallen out of the habit of reviewing, so bear with me if I'm a little rusty. It was a really good fic in which nothing is held sacred. This seems to be par for the course with your fics. All in all, I found it to be most enjoyable. Keep it up.
Arch. |
Reviewed By: R80 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2002 22:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was MUCH better than the preview you showed me before. That koji's like Hawkeye from MASH: i like. can't wait to see more of this. |
