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| "Sore Throat" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: autumn On: November 12, 2002 09:43 CST
Comment/Review:
A delightful read as expected. Only you can make a sore throat story so interesting! Just gotta love Sage's bratty little "I'm sick stay away" attitude that everyone overlooks and dotes on him anyway *hee hee* And of course his vulnerability just like his Dad. I like that you've made him so much like Vegeta and yet still his own person. We love Sage! | Reviewed By: Vega Obscura the King On: November 02, 2002 12:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Alas, I am also a veteran of the tonsilitis war. Poor little Prince...
**Sage puts down the pillow he was gonna throw if Vega had called him chibi and smirks**
Sage: At least someone knows what I am.
**Sage walks away leaving zingzinglee on the ground after a pillow attack**
**smallest voice possible**
Vega: Chibi
**Sage storms back into the room**
Sage: I heard that!!!!
Vega: Bye...gotta go duck these pillows that the little chibi prince is throwing at me...good job with the story (even tho I have read it before) | Reviewed By: Dark Serapha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2002 12:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww.. that was sweet. Another kawai chibi tail! I wonder what I did wrong - my mom surely never did such a fuss about me when I was down with some sickness or another. But then us humans are not as sensitive as the Saiyajin so I guess it makes sense.
Well, it has been a pleasure to be your guest for another story, Talon, as always, and as always, thank you for a delightful read!
Your's worshipping you half fallen angel
Dark Serapha | Reviewed By: zingzinglee [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2002 03:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My poor chukra! As a veteran of the tonsilitis war, I know how the poor chibi feels. *ducks incoming pillows launched by said demi-Saiyan*
Anyhew (yes, I mean anyhew), this story was written flawlessly, as per usual, and I now feel a whole lot better about being up at 4am with an inhaler sticking out of my craw (why can noone make grape-flavored asthma medication?).
And Nyquil is one of the most vile things on Earth. Next to liver. *shudder* |
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