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| "First Person Plural" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] | | Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 › » ] | Reviewed By: The Wyrd Sister [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 16:32 CST
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I LOVE MPD fics. Actually I'm facinated my MPD perod. Great fic! *worships*
| Reviewed By: AyatheWaterDemon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 11:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this story lots! Duo's alters are funny. ^^
| Reviewed By: ITSAME On: May 08, 2004 01:56 CDT
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Oh, man, you have GOT to continue this fic! It's awesome! Usually you see Duo with depression, but never something like this.
| Title: Prologue - Ch 6
Reviewed By: mookienh [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 22:17 CST
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This is a rather interesting spin on Duo's personality - how he can be both upbeat and cheerful as well as deadly in combat. I found this fic through gwyaio.org and I read the intro about the story being completed but not yet uploaded, so I dove right in. Glad I did. The obsessive behavior of Bailey that drove Duo to plead for Heero's help was almost chilling in the precision in which the task was performed. I normally provide more examples of aspects of a story that capture my attention and that really make a story shine in my opinion so I apologize for not being more specific. I know this story hasn't been touched in over a year, and it isn't uploaded on your website, but I would love to keep an eye on it for future updates, should they ever be forthcoming.
| Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 11:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one interesting story^_^ VERY interesting and I see it's quite depressing and so on. VERY original and cool at the same time ;_; it's very well written and well brought out from a person's POV VERY GOOD one too. ^_^ I'll check it out at ff.net and read more ^_^ The story is soooo interesting and so depressing at the same time that makes me think of my own depressions ^_^ I've really enjoyed this story and it's getting more interesting each time when a new chapter is up.
Anyways GOOD work!!! | Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 00:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like. Interesting, personalities. makes a lot of sense if you think about it. Duo's had a major stressful childlife and he sure's hell switches personalities often. Though I always considered him more manic-depressive myself. | Reviewed By: Dark Tenchi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 21:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really loving this and i do truly hope you continue writing it *chibi eyes* pweeeeeaaaaassssseeeeeee? I'll love you forever | Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2002 10:27 CST
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DUDE! makes me wonder if any one i know is has MPD. love the story btw. its really good and is i ever have to do a project on MPD i know who to ask.
nedd more ASAP,
~*~Dark Princess~*~ | Reviewed By: Gemini Maxwell On: September 30, 2002 18:35 CDT
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Hey, I already reviewed this yesterday. I just thought I'd tell you I spent the whole day thinking about this fic. I told everyone I saw to read it, even people I dont know. (I'm serious, I did.) This is the best fan fiction I've ever read, and Ive been reading/writing for a long time, over 3 years. It really is amazing! You've done a great job, and I'm just about to read it again! UPDATE SOON OR I WILL SICK MY PENGUINS ON YOU! lol not really. If only I had killer penguins! Anyway, you are amazing, and I would pay for a book written like this. I've payed for books written worse then this. You are a ridiculously good author. Kudos to you! ::clap clap clap:: | Reviewed By: Gemini Maxwell On: September 29, 2002 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wanted to give you an originality rating of 11, but they didnt make it. This story is so great! One of my closest friends has Multiple Personality Disorder, so it really means a lot to me that you know so much about it and took the time to write a story. Plus, I love 1+2, and you keep Duo-baby and Heero in character really well! UPDATE SOON! Love the story! | Reviewed By: janine On: August 06, 2002 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The overall story was on a topic that very few can continue along. I found that once I started reading, it was annoying if I was interupted by anyone/thing. I wanted to finish the fic. The D.I.D. and M.O.D. was a very tough subject to get across to the reader, and I found that this writer did infact do so with panache, at one time I found myself skipping a few paragraphes only to go back and read them all. I would be very happy to purchase this if it was in paper or hardback.
I gave low scorings for spelling and grammer because it didn't really matter to me how it was spelt, I just found I couldn't stop reading... Also low scoring for enjoyment but not because I didn't enjoy it, infact I did so, but when reading this I couldn't really give a damn, I just wanted to continue reading...]*evil grin* | Reviewed By: duosan On: June 20, 2002 11:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god... I loved this story. I don't think I've ever seen anything like it before. I really enjoyed this story. You did such great work with the seperate entities. It must have been extremely difficult. Congrats on a job well done! | Reviewed By: Tritorella On: June 07, 2002 04:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The idea of this story is novel, and well executed. It explores a mental illness about which most of us know nothing, in a believable and well-characterised way. All the pilots are well-done, and their reactions are interesting and moving. I did feel that there was a slightly too abrupt about face with Heero, but it is explained later in a way which makes sense. Brava. | Reviewed By: motionblur [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2002 01:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've done a brilliant job with what you've undertaken, quite frankly. The portrayal of MPD is taut, serious, and believable. I learned some things I did not know. ^_~ Your writing style was clear and to the point, without the unnecessary embellishments so many GW fic writers are so fond of. You weren't afraid to create awkward moments for your characters when those awkward moments were required. Here is what I think you can improve upon. Duo (and his crew) were all vividly fleshed out, and I would have loved to see some of that in Heero. You didn't use the other Gundam pilots very much, which is okay, but I didn't get a sense of Heero at all. His actions from start to finish were a mystery to me. Perhaps you wanted it to come across that way, as likely Duo didn't understand why Heero was doing what he was either, but sometimes you slipped into Heero's POV, and you could have done some explanation then. Heero seemed more like a blank slate you were using to lever your story and I didn't see much tribute to the canon Heero. What frustrated me was his about face with "I want normal." It came out of the blue to me. Wasn't expecting it, and it left me with a strangely sour feel because the vague sketches of Heero you'd given us wouldn't, I thought, act like that. That's my main problem with this story: the lack of real character development on Heero's part. However, what you set to show with Duo, you did brilliantly, and kudos on a truly heart-tugging fic. I'll be reading the sequel now and hoping that some things are explained on Heero's part that weren't before. My gut feeling for this fic is that I love it, and that you are very brave for choosing this subject to tackle, and very talented for handling it so beautifully. ^_^ | Reviewed By: Ashley Akaihi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2002 03:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, i really just have to agree with alot of these people here. Especially Koshiroryuu, the anonomous, and Koyote19. I loved FPP.....and hated it. I too felt as though i missed a chapter and probably had a longing for a happier ending. Duos just been through so much shit just to be treated like _that_. = ( It just didn't seem right. On the other hand, i thought you had a lovely writing style that seemed to suck me in and i greatly await a happier sequel. | | Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 › » ] |
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