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| "Sadness" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: ?! On: March 24, 2004 17:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear God, I hope you just learned English, because the grammar, spelling, characterization, wording, plot, and everything else about this fic is terrible. If you have a beta reader, fire them, because they're obviously as idiotic as you are to allow you to put this up. Just get over your writing skills and don't bother torturing the fandom anymore. Nobody likes a sickening Mary Sue.
| Title: Umm...
Reviewed By: K On: March 08, 2004 19:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this fic could have benefited a lot from...Oh, I don't know. Proofreading, editing, characterization, a plot, thought. Although, I have to admit, the subtle use of humor with "She went searching for Sage's hidden eye" was a hit with me. I was rolling on the floor with that bit.
| Title: Oh Dear.
Reviewed By: Larra On: March 08, 2004 14:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is English not your original language? Because that would explain a lot.
| Title: WTF?!
Reviewed By: Riki On: March 08, 2004 02:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I'm not even interested in RW, but this demanded a review. This is one of the worst fics I have ever read in my life. I mean, could your characters be more cliche and MarySue? And have you ever heard the terms 'spell check,' 'grammar check,' or 'betaing'? 'Over cased day'? 'Red shrieked hair'? I could go on and on just about the grammar and spelling problems with this, but I won't. I'll just say, this thing sucks, and whoever told you it was really good is obviously on some serious drugs.
| Reviewed By: Rouxy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 19:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'Twas peachy, colie dear! ^_~ I loved it! I hope you countinue you, like I've been bugging you to! ^_^ Awesome job! |
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