| "Only In Your Eyes Am I Worthy" Reviews/Comments [ 60 ] |
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Title: Chapter 14
Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2003 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad to see you back in action. I look forward to another update. This one was good, as always. |
Title: Haha...
Reviewed By: Evogirl On: September 03, 2003 16:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Excellent fanfic. Haha...did you know that you used a t.A.T.u lyric in your last chapyter title? I'm not sure if the other chapyters are like that but that's a t.A.T.u lyric you used. |
Reviewed By: mikeyguy On: July 23, 2003 13:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The reason why the orginality rating is so low is because this story bears a startling resemblances to Brave Nurse Shinji. If u havent read that story then i will post the link here, and u can read it and compare it to your story. Well i cant find the link now but when i do find it, i will post it for ya. Other than that i like the fic. |
Reviewed By: LainEverliving On: May 14, 2003 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been following this fanfic ever since I first saw it on Fandomination.com, and I was overjoyed to see the latest three chapters turn out so nicely. Some readers have commented on the story being somewhat OOC, but I would argue that this is not the case at all. Rather, it is taking the characters and expanding them, so that they can mold themselves to the new set of situations which have been created by the changes to the Evangelion history. Major compliaments on taking a new and interesting spin on a concept few are willing to touch. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Bebop On: March 28, 2003 20:33 CST
Comment/Review:
CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: The Last Face [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 21:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The way I see it, Gendo took losing Yui a lot a lot harder than he lets on. He's off his bespectacled rocker.
I.E. Hard enough to end the entire world over it. Haven't seen EOE yet, so I can't say this myself, but bastard friend spoiled it. GRRR...
Excelletnt! Tres bon! Must finish reading... |
Reviewed By: The Last Face [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I shouldn't read this. Eva's supposed to be depressing, Rei/Shinji isn't supposed to work, Rei II's spit-and-chewing-gum soul isn't supposed to be capable of bonding with Shinji's!
But I'm glad I'm reading this. I'm such a sucker for feelgood stuff. It makes me all warm and fuzzy, rather than staring at my TV and muttering 'that's not cool'. This is good. After all, Rei III and Shinji will never, ever, ever work. |
Reviewed By: Tiek Mo Shet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2003 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an excellent fanfic. I do have to agree that Rei is slightly OOC, just slightly, however if she wasn't then nothing would happen ja?
I like the way that you have portrayed Rei, externally she is still very much like she is NGE but the thoughts she has make her seem much more human. Shinji never grew a spine in NGE and it's nice to see him grow atleast the beginning of one here, that was one of the things I despised most about the original, no matter what I just couldn't care about Shinji the was he was, in this fic I do. I have to admit that initially I was afraid that this might go the way of Asuka bashing however her psycho therapy sessions are very interesting. Also I think that you have done a good job of capturing what Asuka is like on the inside and not just the front she puts on. Also her use of German is well used. In the original they seemed to just drop the fact that she was but here it is brought out.
I'm loving this fic and I hope you keep the chapters coming. |
Reviewed By: Priest On: February 13, 2003 16:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i realy like your work on this one please continue it soon. Ja-ne =(^_^)= |
Reviewed By: No WhereMan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 06:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, besides the rampant OOC that continues throughout this story, this wasn't so bad. This soooo, reminds me of "So Happily Together..." it's not even funny. But it's good that there is a Eva story that doesn't have Shinji with Asuka, or even worst Kaworu. (shutters alot) Anyway I would like to see more of this story and I noticed that it's been a while since you last updated so that mean you better get crackin. Also I feel you on that NC-17 ban on FF.net, I too was one of the many authors that was burned by that pathedic excuse of a site. (CURSE THE GROUND XING WALKS ON!!! MAY IT BOIL INTO LAKES OF FIRE AND MAGMA!!!!) Anyway...It's time for my meds....Ja Ne. |
Reviewed By: Sibilant Spirit On: January 28, 2003 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i reeeeeeely enjoyed this story... would enjoy reading it again. |
Reviewed By: Ramiel On: January 19, 2003 19:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fan fiction story. When do u plan to have the 14th chapter up? |
Reviewed By: Phil On: January 05, 2003 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well this kept me up many hours past my normal sleep time...I am most impressed...do continue |
Reviewed By: David On: November 24, 2002 15:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
An enjoyable and interesting fanfic. Keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: Steve VADER On: November 18, 2002 15:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ich bin erfreut diese Story hier zu sehen.
Jetzt weiss ich wo ich sie finden kann, selbst wenn FF.net herumzickt.
Freue mich schon auf das nächste Kapitel. |
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