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| "Only In Your Eyes Am I Worthy" Reviews/Comments [ 60 ] | | Pages (4): [ 1 2 3 4 › » ] | Title: Incredible
Reviewed By: barrs789 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2009 22:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is probably in my top 5 fanfics of all time. Brilliant. My only qualm is the incredible B$tchiness of Asuka (which to me is upsetting since I'm a big Asuka fan and I thought you made her even more screwed up and violent than see should be). However, you eased everything in and made it believable, so kudos to you good master of the written arts...I salute you.
| Reviewed By: A-Z Mark II [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 09:40 CST
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Hmm, only the epi to go. At least Shinji will finally give Asuka what she wants and needs, since they will be the last two on earth and all... ;)
| Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 22:53 CST
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oh my god, i hate myself.... sorry about not reviewing, but my teaches are assholes.... research papers left and right, anyway, i can't believe that this story is over.... in one epilogue, i can't believe it.... but i have to acceptit.... such is the way of the world....i guess, i'll read anything else you've written.... if it's is as good as this, i will be happy..... but w/e write the epilogue, will you?
| Title: Chapter 35
Reviewed By: A-Z Mark II [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 10:29 CST
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Shinji missed his chance to get Asuka's cherry because he was a self-absorbed twit, but Rei didn't hesitate. :) I found it very entertaining that Asuka almost fell into the 'Shinji Trap' as it were, over-obsessing about their little trio. I still think that Shinji wimped out when he made that flimsy excuse about 'not waking Rei'. Had it been reversed, I doubt that Rei would have bothered worrying about waking Asuka. Oh, well - maybe next chapter Shinji will get to FINALLY finish his job and complete Asuka. Someone REALLY needs to fix his little head-in-ass obsession. ;)
| Title: Finally!
Reviewed By: A-Z Mark II [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 09:59 CST
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It's about damn time that Shinji removes his head from his anal passage! Not surprisingly, Asuka reached the logical conclusion to the problem long before he did, but for the last couple of chapters, he had been figting her assistance in seeing the lesson a lot harder than he fights angels! And frankly, with two girls wanting to share him, I have to wonder if he is just dumb as a rock, or if he hasn't gotten his head permanently lodged in his ass. Excellent chapter, and I look forward to the conclusion.
| Reviewed By: LainEverliving [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 01:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, the genius continues. Never in all my days of fanfic reading have I enjoyed (and continue to enjoy, whenever there is an update) such a fulfilling, well-executed story as this. I don't think it is too high of praise at all to say that you have created the definitive dramatic Evangelion story. The amazingly well though out plot, the realistically drawn characters, the touching interactions between them, and their triumphs and tragedies are as involving as the original series itself. And, the addition of the romantic and sexual elements simply better expands the characters and who they are as human beings (and / or Angels). The effort you've put into this story really shows, and even though waiting for new updates is frustrating, I can completely understand as a fellow writer how long it takes. Rest assured, I will eagerly keep following your story until the end. I've been reading this work now for about three years on various websites, and time after time, I keep coming back to it. I especially appreciate the illustrated version on your website. As you keep working on this and your other writing, know that you have many a fan, including me, who are eager to hear where you'll take us next.
| Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 19:58 CST
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i'm completely sane...... *twitch* wow... therepy does work...... *twitch* well, nice chapter and i really feel bad for them..... can't wait...... for the next chapter...... and nice to know you're still alive.... i would've reviewed the day you updated if i wasn't so busy.....
| Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: A-Z Mark II [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 08:19 CST
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And finally, a fresh chapter! Very nice. :) I continue to experience the urge to kick Shinji in the head for his stubborn idiocy, but that just means that you are doing a good job with the characters. Excellent read!
| Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 17:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wunderbar. Great characterization. The chasm between Rei's thoughts and what she actually expressed was a little wide at first, but that's closed up now. I really like your crazy-but-healing story for Asuka, lots of depth, risky but you keep her consistent. Rei and Shinji could use some therapy, too, though, provided they could manage it without eventually revealing the whole "I died once and have angel DNA" thing. The Groundhog's Day^100 plot is building nicely. Evangelion's story could benefit from being made even more complicated. No, really :) By the way, small world. From my perspective, anyway. I discovered this story and the Chloe mod completely seperately of each other, and find they're made by the same person. Not that it's exactly rare to find an anime fan and an RPG fan in the same person, but still.
| Title: Good...
Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 00:38 CST
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Great story... keep it up!!!! Also one more thing... NERV EMPLOYEES GET BOOZE NO MATTER THEIR AGE?!?!?!?!?!?!?! WOOOOOOOOOOO BOOZE PARTY!!!!!!!"Chrono" Shit.... note to self.... Remember to force him to get his medication refilled and taken...."Me" *choaks to unchoncesness and is forces to swallow medication by Chrono* (see Insane Days reviews for info and funny skits abut Chrono!)
| Title: I like what you have ^_^
Reviewed By: Cardcaptor_RLH85 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2006 12:12 CST
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Over the last day or so I've read the entire story to date and I really like what I've seen. I just hope that it doesn't take another 2+ years for it to be completed :Þ Well I'm looking forward to seeing how this plays out and I'll be checking out that Asuka blog you have on your website too ^_^
| Reviewed By: Ovaron [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 23:09 CST
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ok, upon reading chapter 9, i realized she's not dead, sorry 'bout the flame
| Title: chapter 9
Reviewed By: Ovaron [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 22:55 CST
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YOU BASTARD!! YOU KILLED REI!
| Title: Chapter 32
Reviewed By: A-Z Mark II [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 08:16 CST
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Ah! New chapter! Shinji is still being a damned idiot, but what can you do? Lots of development in the mechanics that drive the Asuka-Shinji relationship (and by extension, what drives the Rei-Shinji relationship), some near misses, and Old Man Fuyutski giving some pointers on train sex. Nice chapter! :)
| Title: I'M BACK AND RARIN TO REVIEW!!!!!
Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 17:27 CST
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FINALLY I'M BACK TO BEING ABLE TO DO WHAT I DO, REVIEWIN!^^ AWESOME FIC GERAT NEW CHAP STILL NO.1 ON FAV LIST!!!!!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND KEEP THE CHAPS COMING!!!!!
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