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| "What You Got" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: I Luv Vege *It wont let me log in!* On: September 23, 2003 06:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh wow.. original as... Little confusing for me though!! Haha... Aww.. I so wanted them to return back to their normal timeline!! Oh well! It was very well written, I liked the touch of Shakespeare-ish wording for the Prophetess (sp?) good stuff!! Yeah a sequel would be nice actually...
| Reviewed By: Lauryn On: December 26, 2002 05:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good and original story, but can you please please pretty please write a sequel. you was so mean to poor kaky. and get him and vegeta back as mates together. i mean they are meant to be. vegeta can not so easy give up on kaky. i like it but notthe ending with vegeta and kaky. and i not glad that kaky had betrayed vegeta but he is even a little bit naive. vegeta should fighting to get his mate back. i mean vegeta can not so easy give up if he love kaky really. |
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