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Title: Great Writing
Reviewed By: Inuyasha is a tottal Hotty On: December 30, 2003 02:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVE YOUR STORY IT'S SOOOOOOOOO GREAT YOU MUST KEEP WRITING. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 03:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool fic.
hmmm, I've never considered Kouga as a sexual figure befor.
Your from Detroit? Cool, I grew up there. Yea Detroit!
Keep writing please. :) |
Reviewed By: inu/kag On: May 02, 2003 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can you write more? this is sooo halirous. i was laughing for about an hour (my sister said so) after i read the part about the and with the fish egg sack. hahaha good one. but please, write more |
Reviewed By: Animefan4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a cool fanfic!! It was so funny!! Keep writing!! Please hurry up with the rest!! |
Reviewed By: Maya (maya_blaze@hotmail.com) On: March 02, 2003 21:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic's good, but the grammar's awful. I couldn't even get past chapter 3. Why don't you try finding a beta reade? It'll make your fic a lot more enjoyable. |
Reviewed By: Nanshi On: February 09, 2003 21:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kinda hard to understand. It looks like part of your sentences are cut short or something. Sentence Fragments!! You also need to check your spelling. Too many errors.
But, still, it's a great story.
Poor Kagome. I know the next chapter Inuyasha is sooooo going to get her. Update soon. |
Reviewed By: Lover On: February 06, 2003 21:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
How about Kohaku 4 Kaya?Like I said b4 continue. |
Reviewed By: lyn On: February 06, 2003 13:55 CST
Comment/Review:
maybe you should use kouga for kaya |
Reviewed By: Sora and Tai forever(yetagain to lazy to sign in) On: February 03, 2003 22:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Poor Miroku! hands every one who R&R there fave plushie of inu and Co.!huges each one! |
Reviewed By: princess-of-anime-kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 18:47 CST
Comment/Review:
I love the story so far :D But.... inu yasha's hair ;-; was that absolutely necessery? |
Reviewed By: sesshouamru lover On: February 02, 2003 13:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a good chappy espeacilly when Kaya pissed
inuyasha off!!!!!!
please continue the story!!!!
POST SOOOON!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Lover On: February 02, 2003 11:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Maybe u should find someone for that Kaya. Anyway continue. |
Reviewed By: Moon_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 07:47 CST
Comment/Review:
WAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!! SHORT CHAPPIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
....*ahem*......
Cool chapter I wanna know what is next so please continue soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon!!!
Allie~ |
Reviewed By: Lover On: January 30, 2003 19:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*BURST OUT LAUGHING* Sorry could't help myself ,that was the greatest prank ever that kagome did to Inuyasha. Please continue. |
Reviewed By: angle-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 20:50 CST
Comment/Review:
sorry about being grounded.
Bummer.
This is really good.--But Inu-Yasha's hair is gone!!*sob*
Any ways I'll be waiting.
angle-chan |
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