Reviewed By: REInoRYU On: December 26, 2002 14:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was probably one of the worst fics that I have EVER read, and I have been doing this for YEARS. Okay I was curious about the story...and yes I read the WHOLE thing just to make sure that it wasn't just to give the author proper respect. But this thing stunk...not only does it leave out large CHUNKS of dialog and any kind of explinations, but for the FIRST FIVE (5) chapters all it is...is a bunch of characters saying *I don't want to talk about it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!* Funny I thought the point to a story was to do something OTHER than say I don't want to talk about it. Okay, so I might be a little rough on you...don't get me wrong you have an imagination, just get someone to beta your works prior to subjecting us all to them. |
