"Fubuki no Kaen" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Sai_Saishi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 20:49 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I cringe at the date of this... I'll take that as an indication that this is all the further this story shall go. That developement comes as a disapointment. This is well written, and sounds cool to (I don't know anything about F.E. ...... so I don't know about proper characterization....). I can tell that you have some nice skills and I hope that you continue to practice them even if not to continue this fic.
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Reviewed By: Yukisune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 11:39 CDT Comment/Review: Nice job! I look forward to more of this story, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: kyoberry [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 20:54 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really enjoyed this story. It's not like the others which are all fluff, I can see it building up. Once I finished reading this, I was really annoyed that there wasn't another chapter to read ^__^;;; You're probably not gonna continue it though, seeing as it's been 2 years or so...argh.
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Reviewed By: HaXx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 01:59 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: i dunno if's you're going for a historicallly correct fic you better read on thier hisorty. cause marth would of killed them like cliks finger's that! oh and roy lwanrs how to use fire magic, that MIGHT help them escape |
Reviewed By: AMC On: July 21, 2003 21:38 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Very original idea for a story. Like the way it is going so far. A couple of grammar mistakes. Keep working on the story. |
Reviewed By: Arielle On: June 25, 2003 22:25 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really Liked this story I think it was great Keep writing!!:) |
Reviewed By: Kaori On: March 02, 2003 12:40 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I like it so far! Your grammer needs some work, but I'm looking forward to seeing the rest. |
Reviewed By: Master Duelist Kaori [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 17:45 CST Comment/Review:
Great! I hope you keep going like you have been. |
Reviewed By: BLW On: January 25, 2003 21:40 CST Comment/Review: aww, please continue. this is awsome! |
Reviewed By: Blood Death Screamz On: January 02, 2003 07:03 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love this story. Keep it coming please!!!! |