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| "Gambling My Freedom Away" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] | Reviewed By: Honigbiene [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 22:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awww, Crawlie-sama's falling for Aya! That's so cute. I love Crawford/Aya, and this is such a great story. I can't wait for more!
| Title: Chap.6
Reviewed By: Pandora.81 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 01:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gahhh! I followed Mini's tip (good tip, J. ^^ *huggles*) and read that fic and... It's GREAT! Hehe, I like the C/R and how it develops... and I absolutely love the Y/S. Yeah, I'm another Schu and Yohji obsessed and so I hope to see more of those two, too. ^.~ Ohhhh, and what an evil chapter end! Poor Yotan!!! *snivels* I'm so looking forward to see how Schu reacts to his state and also what Crawfie is going to do about Ran. Please update soon!!!
| Title: Yes!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: MiniMorr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 09:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You updated!!!! Yay!!!!!! Thank you!!!! Thank you!!!! Thank you!!!! Thank you so much!!!! Ahem. Well, I really enjoyed this chapter - I felt so sorry for them all; Crawford, Ran, Yohji and Schu... *sniffles* Crawford shows that he's not as much of a bastard as he was from the beginning, and I really hope that he regrets what he's done to Ran and that they can somehow make it work. Yohji and Schu... I hope you realize that I meant what I said - that I want them to get together (and I also recall something of a one shot you said that you were planning to write? *grins*) and that I won't leave you alone till I get what I want, right? ;) Yes, nice chapter again, and I really, really want more soon! Please? :) ~Mini - hyper now! ;)
| Reviewed By: Shinigami On: January 20, 2003 02:33 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*blinks* Nagi with a nosebleed? He's went and turned into a hentai! Is he, Ken and Farfie workign at the club that Brad owns? Pair up Yotan and Schu! What's wrong with him, why is he having those attacks? And I'm certain that Brad won't want to share Ran... Farfie, if u really want to hurt God, just date a guy! Cuz if I recall correctly, God's against homosexuality, at least that's what several people I know say! | Reviewed By: VOM [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 12:52 CST
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Ran....Brad. *nosebleed*
Nagi's not the only one with a nosebleed.....
A few words spelled wrong, and sometimes you got
-they're-, -there-, and -their-, mixed up. That's all though....
Poor angsty little Youji!!!!!!! Ran is going to eventually get together with Brad...right? Or perhaps you'll twist it and he'll be with Schu and Youji will be with Brad.....*thinks* I hate not being the author.. :D
Continue!
*~*VOM*~* | Reviewed By: kaoru On: January 17, 2003 10:35 CST
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I LIKE!!!!!!
please keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!
hope this is a bradxran fic *____* | Reviewed By: Kachikara On: January 10, 2003 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O More... more...more... more... more... more... more... more... more... more... more... more... more... more... more... [one million mores later] more... more... more... more... [another few thousand later] more... more... more...
Aya: ::smack::
Oro...^^^^ MORE! PLEASE WRITE MORE! I can see where this is going... or at least where I hope it's going...^.^ | Reviewed By: Phox On: January 02, 2003 13:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh this is getting interesting! All the suspense is killing me! Keep it up =) | Reviewed By: icefyre On: January 02, 2003 13:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Crawford cheated, didn't he? He is a pre-cog after all. Well, anyway, I love the story and hope you post more chapters soon. At first, I thought you were going to put Youji as the owner of the gambling den, but hey, this works as well. So is poor Ran going to become a love slave to Crawford, hehe (^_^). I can't wait for you next chatper!! |
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