| "Tormenting Wishes" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 18:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue the story!!!!
Will they tell each other of their feelings?!?!?!
please post soon!!!! |
Reviewed By: Inu bullet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 22:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inuyasha:OOPS! I slipped |
Reviewed By: The_Fallen_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 16:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey please please update this is a great story and I can't wait 'till you r next one |
Reviewed By: Lady_Nikki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 16:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its An okay story but needs more exstement |
Reviewed By: Sora and Tai forever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2003 23:27 CST
Comment/Review:
I think razorbld is right kill the well! yes add kikyo(even though i hate her!grrrr!)
you should add kikyo becuse it can be a test to test there love or some thing like that! in later chapters!..hehe
g2g bye!
*Kairi-chan* |
Reviewed By: Kayko Yukimura On: January 05, 2003 23:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Awsome Job im amazed i love it. My spelling sucks i know! lol my dad tells me everyday i hate it. Well keep up the goodjob |
Reviewed By: razorbld On: January 04, 2003 08:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter, Tip: Have Kagome fall off of something sort of high up, and have her fall right onto a very surprised and very relived hanyou's lips. Now that would make a very interesting first kiss.^_^ You should destroy the well, HOWEVER... have kagome and Inuyasha trapped in the past, not separated. |
Reviewed By: razorbld On: January 03, 2003 15:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was good... just try to get someone else to do your editing, It's nothing personal it just helps to have someone not you check over your work. You catch more mistakes that way. same goes for everyone. |
Reviewed By: Mai On: January 03, 2003 13:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your fanfic, it was original and really cool. I love how you wrote your story and it was easy to read and understand. I was also happy that you had the characters act like they did, instead of having do other stuff. This was one of the better fanfics that I have read. |
Reviewed By: yang On: January 02, 2003 15:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, not to be mean, but it is "wench" not "wrench". So far it is really funny I love the whole him talking to himself scenes. Plus the wall was great. My grammar sucks, gomen!! |
Reviewed By: mystic_writer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 13:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a great start! I'll put this fic on my 'watch list.'
Inuyasha's so mean to Kagome sometimes! I think he deserved that wall!
Please write more soon! -mystic_writer |
Reviewed By: Coolio On: January 01, 2003 21:27 CST
Comment/Review:
It's really good. Continue soon! |
Reviewed By: Moon_Kitsune On: January 01, 2003 20:36 CST
Comment/Review:
*jumpin up and down* Hoo yippee! Meza tink dat wuz coolsom!! Pease continue!! Hehe!!!!!!!
~Allie-chan~ |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2003 19:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*two thumbs up* Great job! I loved it! If I had 10 thumbs, they would all be up right now! |
Reviewed By: inuyashas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 11:57 CST
Comment/Review:
You just had to end it there right before it got to the good mushy stuff! Oh well please hurry and update cuz i want to see some kissing! Inu & Kag 4 ever!!!
~luv ya~ |
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