| "Tanabata - Star Festival" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: Brilliant!
Reviewed By: marlene_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2011 12:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well writen! i love bulma´s letter :D it´s very beautiful and it´s a poem about her feelings about vegeta and the way he controlles her in sex... woh! it´s my favourite part :D |
Reviewed By: BogusRed [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 09:33 EDT
Comment/Review:
That was interesting. I enjoyed it.
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 21:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh, that was really good. I just love your stuff!!
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Title: Wonderful!
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 21:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This was a very erotic and well written piece. Quite sad at the end...but well done. Bravo!
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Reviewed By: Louise On: November 05, 2003 11:17 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely agree with everybody here. It was simply the best B/V one shot ever written. And I'm not just giving you a compliment, it really is the best B/V one shot. Great job!
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Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2003 03:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great way to incorporate a beautiful lemon into a fanfic! Great original idea! |
Reviewed By: Forgotton Vampire On: April 15, 2003 22:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that this fic was wnoderful, you did such a good job on wrting it that I had no other choice but to give you a top rating. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 10, 2003 01:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG Ember, you did it again. So beautifully written, so emotional and so sad. Vegeta was sooo in character, and that's not an easy thing to do. Once more you've demonstrated that your writing talents should not be taken lightly. Bravo girl. Bravo!! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2003 22:01 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so beutafully writin and thought out oh man that was so good. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: January 07, 2003 06:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, you put the rest of us B/V hacks to shame! Excellent job girl! |
Reviewed By: Vampkestrel On: January 07, 2003 00:59 EST
Comment/Review:
*eyes fill with tears* waiiiiiiiii
that was sad....... good but sad.. sequeal maybe? please? |
Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 08:59 EST
Comment/Review:
I really liked it. But I'm not suprised, seeming as I like jut about all the fanfiction you write. Although it leaves up wondering about what else may happen...
Anyways, nice going Ember :) |
Reviewed By: Legana On: January 06, 2003 11:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great, really I mean it, this was the best one shot I have ever read, finaly no shallow one, this really had an amazing story hidden.
Very good, I'm thrilled to have read it, your way of writing was very intriguing as well, your words are carfully taken and I love that, I never read it in a story, it's obvious you took your time for this, and I'm glad for it.
I wish you all the luck in your future writing, may you have many good reviews, because you really deserve it.
I enjoyed this story so much, Vegeta was so well observed, he wasn't OOC at all, great!
keep on going with this style, it's very rare and I'm glad to know it.
In case you think I'm just a weird gal, I really know something about writing, I read a lot of fanfics (reading them for a few years now), and I'm quite a critic. (also about my own work =) )
I really enjoyed this.
Greets and kisses. |
Reviewed By: valeyard On: January 10, 2003 19:05 EST
Comment/Review:
That was beautiful. Those are the only words I can find to write.
It was just beautiful (sniff).
Beautiful! |
