| "Faded" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Leanie On: June 25, 2003 02:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like this and am eager to see where you are headed with this, Poor Aya. He has to stay with Schwartz. And what is Schu's plan for him? I cant wait to read your next part. |
Reviewed By: PyroBaka [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2003 09:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ Farfie!!! ^_^ *glomps Farfie* Uhhh, anyway....WRITE MORE!!! Mwahahahaha Fujimiya is with his arch enemy lalalalalalala... |
Reviewed By: Lilla [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2003 07:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Heh another great start! Hope you will write more of this soon am really curious as to what is going to happen to poor captive Ran in Schuldig's hands. Also please write more of pyrokinetics?!!!
Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: MiniMorr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2003 06:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a nice set-up for a story, please continue! :) Schuldig x Aya/Ran-pairings are so yummy! :) |
