| "Half-Breed's Curse" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2009 16:55 CST
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this is a good story, i hope to read more soon
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Reviewed By: Chrislea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 03:49 CDT
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I feel pretty lucky being able to read this right as it's posted. Hiei with boobs is like a little ray of sunshine that brightens my day. ^_~ While it's almost irresistable to use the old Jusenkyou plot device, you've resisted and given us a whole new branch of ideas to consider about the forbidden twins. ^~
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Reviewed By: TYF(total yu yu hakusho freak) On: December 26, 2003 16:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it! love it! love it! i've read all of your fanfics and recommended them to all of my friends because they are so so so so so so so so so so good!!! please update soon!!1
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Reviewed By: camera34 On: December 22, 2003 23:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Rosethorn i enjoy all your stories but wished that certain fics would finish like Half-breeds curse.
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Reviewed By: Siora [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2003 12:29 CDT
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ooo, that was very nice...wow. Ok well, update soon! |
Reviewed By: coregium On: August 23, 2003 12:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like it. i can't remember if ive reviewed this b4 but if i have just bear with me. any way i really liked it as i have already said. PLEASE WRITE MORE!!! |
Reviewed By: Kitty-Yasha On: August 07, 2003 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your fic... but i'm getting bored waiting for the next chapter i think that you've started it of great. suspense and everything but i'm waiting for your next chapter.......O_o |
Reviewed By: XiaoXiong [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 16:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was wonderful. Hope continue sometime soon. |
Reviewed By: Kitty-Yasha On: July 09, 2003 15:02 CDT
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Hey interesting fic. I love how you had koenma threaten Hiei like that it was funny. ANywho i hope you update soon!out of curiosity how come your not making it a Hiei/Kurama fic? |
Reviewed By: Tewks [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 20:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay another fic from Rose! Update soon! - your biggest fan (tewksy) |
Reviewed By: P.H. Wise [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2003 15:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
First, let me just say that I don't know much about this series. I've seen the first few episodes of the series as well as one of the movies, but that was quite a while ago, and my memories of it are hazy. Furthermore, I'll be completely unable to comment on whether or not the characters are IC or OOC.
With that out of the way, I've got a few comments to make.
Not bad. Although I've never been much into Yu Yu Hakushou fics (I only read this one after seeing a request for C&C in the forums), this looks fairly promising - I'm actually fairly curious to discover what's going to happen next. Spelling and grammar seems alright - the only iffy section (in terms of grammar) is the one where Koenma is describing the abilities of the tower, which doesn't quite flow as well as the rest - and the writing style makes it fairly clear what's happening and who's speaking when.
The only real complaint I've got is that there's not much in the way of description in the narrative. This takes place in the underworld? What does it look like? Are they alone there, or are there others walking around? Is this some giant office-building from (literally) hell that they're inside of? I'm not saying to go write like four pages of descriptive text - a few sentences here and there would be enough to help me understand where this is taking place, etc.
*shrugs* Admittedly, I'm not too into Yu Yu Hakushou, so what bugged me about this may very well not be a problem at all for the typical fan of this series. *I* may not have any idea what 'outside of Koenma's office' looks like (or inside the office either, for that matter), but I'm sure that the average Yu Yu Hakushou otaku does.
Oh, and as a side note: I didn't rate it on 'originality/creativity/ because it seems... a bit too early to do so at this point. I'll have to wait and see on that one. ^.^
On a scale that consists of, from lowest to highest, Utter Crap That Man Was Not Meant To Know, prime MST material, crap, not bad, decent, ok, good, excellent, and superior, I'd rate this as a 'good.' |
Reviewed By: Sakura02 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2003 21:02 CST
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Way'da go, Rose. I think I'll really like this fic- since I've liked the others that you've written. ^_^
Anyways, I've updated Venom (ch. 3), so if you'd like to take a look, critique, and be on your way, I'd be very pleased. Thanks! |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2003 20:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
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I've only watched the movie about that stone stone thingy -_-' hehehe, anyways... I read a lot of fanfics of unknown but interesting anime though.
I'll keep the style to 9, if there's more coming it might go to 10 too ^_^ your style isn't that bad, I'm not better myself ^_^' but at least I understood the fic a little since it's still chapter 1.
I haven't notice any grammar faults or anything, but maybe it will somehow change in the near future if you keep sending them ^_^
I can only try to explain those two, mayb it's not that informative, since this is the first chapter I've to wait patiently for the next chapter ^-^. The fic is interesting and I'm curious about what's going to happen ^-^ so keep it up!! |
