| "Body Switching" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: The_female_lecturess On: July 18, 2003 21:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehehe! Cool! I love it! Update asap! |
Reviewed By: Laina On: June 25, 2003 01:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come on I want to see what happens in the next chappy!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEEEEEEEEEEEZZZZ UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Dragon Girl On: April 07, 2003 18:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
BULMA! She's the one obsessed with what people think. |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2003 12:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*holds her sides* hahahahahaha! omg thats so funny! this is such a great fic so far ow my sides are hurting really bad! make a new chapter a.s.a.p. i need to laugh more! lol great job so far! |
Reviewed By: Sazz On: February 16, 2003 14:05 CST
Comment/Review:
It's not bad, and your idea is good. More description would help a lot, and more insight into the characters, instead of relying so much on the stereotypes of each character. Keep working on it -- it shows promise.
Oh, and btw, the "I want a total of ten reviews before I continue" thing is probably the worst thing you can say if you want readers -- it's childish and annoying. If you like your story, just write it! |
Reviewed By: Tina On: February 16, 2003 06:49 CST
Comment/Review:
that was really cute. you kinda confused me with who was who, but i got it ok. haha you should make vegeta in bulma's body actually have to sit and talk to chichi all day long! haha that would be funny. good job, keep goin. peace |
Reviewed By: Sakura On: February 13, 2003 17:37 CST
Comment/Review:
That was a very funny chapter. |
Reviewed By: poo On: February 13, 2003 18:14 CST
Comment/Review:
wow |
Reviewed By: Brit-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2003 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was funny.i think u should continue.please make another chapter please.keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Dee On: February 14, 2003 19:07 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
i liked it hope you have vegtea have all the things that woman go through.update soon.. |
