Reviewed By: ... On: December 03, 2002 22:59 CST
Comment/Review:
um, if u are 6, i might think of that fic as even readadle. please stop writing fanfiction that story u wrote is the most un-gripping story i ever read. it sounded more like a bill-cosby book. first of all, it went by super-fast, and second of all, u didnt really do anything to capture the mood of the story. it sounded more like a summary, u are a terrible writer, please kill yourself and spare us from reading any more of your pathetic garbage. P.S. i am not lying, ur story is terrible, please die |
