| "Rukis Birthday" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
Reviewed By: ShinaSilverKit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update its been so long since you have and its such a good story
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Reviewed By: more!! On: August 28, 2005 00:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come on do more :(
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Reviewed By: DeeDee On: August 21, 2005 02:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
u are so good at writing you really should do the next chapter there is a small problem with your story and that is some small sp, misstakes but other than that it's one of the best storys I have ever read so plz post some more chapters because this story can really go places.
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Reviewed By: more!! On: August 21, 2005 02:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are so good at writing you really should do the next chapter there is one small problem with your story and that is some small spelling errors but other than that it is one of the best storys I have ever read so please post some more chapters because this story could really go places.
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Reviewed By: WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! On: July 01, 2005 02:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.K. I just think you want to know that you have Renamon saying in the second chap. that he loves Ruki with all his hearth and I think you mean heart but I don't know you that well so.... But still you are a good writer so update
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Title: More!
Reviewed By: bbmac On: July 01, 2005 02:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More!More!More!More! you MUST do More!
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Reviewed By: SilverKit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked it i hope you do a thrid chapter soon
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Reviewed By: ashenorange On: March 22, 2005 08:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i demand moor!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!
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Reviewed By: ashenorange On: March 17, 2005 13:27 CST
Comment/Review:
I demand more i need more give me more!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Excels
Reviewed By: Ran1 On: May 03, 2004 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent write more
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Reviewed By: An Idiot On: March 15, 2004 17:29 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, that was intersting. Short and to the point. How many more reviews till you put another up?
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Reviewed By: the wizard On: July 26, 2003 13:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its great |
Reviewed By: Blink On: April 13, 2003 13:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um.......pretty good...I say it could be longer....*shrug* but that's just me so oh well....um...continue with the next chapter... |
Reviewed By: tiny On: April 12, 2003 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice i thought it was awesome i would like to read more |
Reviewed By: grayfox_2510 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 18:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, your story is pretty good, altough it goes straight to the point in a paragraph or 2. If you could make them a little longer it would be better but anyway, the story is pretty good...
*Waits for next chapter* |
Reviewed By: guy On: April 06, 2003 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice it could have been longer all around but still good next chapter please |
Reviewed By: wizerd On: April 04, 2003 10:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi you dont mind involve the othe tamers in this fic and som comdy |
Reviewed By: The master On: March 28, 2003 15:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a great story could have been a little bit longer but still very good cant wait untill the next chapter. (i like how u changed renamons gender) |
Reviewed By: Chrismking208 On: March 23, 2003 18:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
well done next chapter plz |
Reviewed By: Renamon On: March 23, 2003 18:26 CST
Comment/Review:
well....it was ok |
Reviewed By: Renamon On: March 14, 2003 19:28 CST
Comment/Review:
could have been longer and been more graphic, then i prob have liked this fic more |
Reviewed By: Ninja On: March 06, 2003 16:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
It was an ok fic, it could have been longer, maybe some more foreplay and more sensual action between Renamon and Ruki.
If another chapter came out I wouldn't hesitate to read it. |
Reviewed By: Mr.Vampire On: March 05, 2003 21:16 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was real good and another chapter please |
