| "Taijiya-no Miroku" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 14:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Have I read this before? Why was it at the top? Anyways, sake and no soup for dinner, Sango and Miroku will definitely have heads in the morning!
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Reviewed By: Nelson Bannaba On: May 08, 2006 23:31 CDT
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Sexy! You brought them together hard and fast, but not lacking your usual style and finesse. I jumped when he first asked her to call him 'husband'. It was titilating, perhaps it got the readers on ff.net to hot and bothered.
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Title: good, for a one-shot
Reviewed By: mylovemiroku [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 01:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall, I liked it. Some details could have been added to transition better between scenes, and since I didn't read the prequal to this, it stands OK on it's own. Good job.
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Reviewed By: Nokomarie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 01:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Uum...anymore? |
Reviewed By: coherentidiot On: March 16, 2003 17:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Wonderfulness! Actually, I think the title means "The Demon Exterminator's Miroku" --- "Miroku no Taijiya" would be "Miroku's Demon Exterminator". First noun describes the second.
Anyway, I was deliriously happy to see that you've reconciled their relationship! ^.^ the lemon didn't hurt, either. lol. |
