| "Pain and Pleasure" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 14:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story, great lemons...
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Reviewed By: payne On: April 16, 2004 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is very good you should keep writing I just can't wait for him to claim her you do believe in the whole biting thing right oh I hope you do
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Reviewed By: payne On: April 16, 2004 01:00 CDT
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Reviewed By: Lynette On: June 29, 2003 21:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Dude, you better keep up the good work, I knew you had it in you and you haven't let me down...I just loved it. I will talk to you later...be good. love, Lynette |
Reviewed By: vegetaslady On: April 06, 2003 15:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow......wow...., just, wow it was , amazing, wow, in got shivers, please update! it was , well it left me speechless. The way you caught the emotion was intense, wow, bravo, encore |
Reviewed By: Lone Vixen On: April 05, 2003 14:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O!
Very, Very, Very good lemon. ^_^!
Just thought i'd say keep up the excellent work on this fic. i really hope that won't be the last lemon in it. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!!!! Please continue!!!!!!!! I cant wait til the next update!!!!! That Lemon was so sweet!!!!!! !!! YAY!!!!!!
And Vegeta flashed SSJ!
YAHOOO! Bulma u rule!!!
Later!!Update soon! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 21:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Goddamn this was cool!!!! Please UPDATE SOOONNNNNN!!!!!!!! IM DYING!!! .
U are very evil a clify!!!! I cant take it people love to do this to me!!
Lemon lemon!!!!!!!!!!!! Im begging u !!!
I want vegeta also!
LATER! |
Reviewed By: Sk8s [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 19:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Sorry about that...I'm working on the paragraphs right now. So check it out in a bit and it should be fixed for your's and everyone's enjoyment. |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 18:54 CST
Comment/Review:
hey Im sorry I feel so bad I didnt thanked u for my cookie.
*Half of it is mine!!!*
Shut yup Sk8s gave it to me!!!!
*No way Im the hentai and u r just a pussy*
Pussy this u bitch!!! ahhh!
(fighting over a cookie)
*There I won thank u and Update soon! >:D*
*Later* |
Reviewed By: Lucky17 On: April 03, 2003 17:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ever hear of paragraphing? |
Reviewed By: Clemment On: March 14, 2003 13:52 CST
Comment/Review:
This is just a comment. The format you are using is hard to read. The lines of type are too close together and one has to move the scroll bar at the bottom of the page to read each sentence! That gets old real fast! |
Reviewed By: TERAGurl On: March 14, 2003 09:28 CST
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OMG! That was great for a first lemon! Thank you for writing one, and for the cookie! LUV YA! |
Reviewed By: Elisabeth6789 On: March 14, 2003 09:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it, thank you for the lemon, it was great! |
Reviewed By: Raven69 On: March 14, 2003 09:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
--DROOLS-- Great lemon, keep it up. |
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