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| "Yu-Gi-Oh-Ji! (Prince of Games)" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 › » ] | Reviewed By: Rey Rey On: August 25, 2004 21:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A good story Yami Goku. Fusing multiple animes together to create this is great. Even though i'm impatient for the next chapter. Knowing from the chapters so far i would have to say that this next chapter is gonna be worth it for all readers of this story. Keep up the good work.
| Title: Where's the shaman king?!
Reviewed By: ?????? On: August 11, 2004 04:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tao Jun only! SHe doesn't even say or do anything what's the point! other than that great story! Update plz!
| Reviewed By: jkBAKURA [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 18:16 CDT
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I know how frusterating writing can be, especially with several projects going at once, and I feel that the newest chapters are very worth the wait. Believe it or not, I read the story more for the duels then for the lemon content. (Not to say that I haven't read it though) You seem to have a rare talent for making custom cards make sense and for the most part well rounded. Something you don't see too much of in a tournament yu-gi-oh fic. Not to mention that your character development is far above the avarage writer. Most importantly to all other reviewers, lay off. The reason you are reading tyhis is that you can't get a good story to come off of your own keyboard. Creativity takes time. Good luck with the rest of the tournament Yami Goku. And congratilations on a fic that I will continue to read through to the end, no matter when it is written.
| Reviewed By: dreamkid21 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 05:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am just now reading the 4th chapter, but I have to say that this story is awesome. You have the perfect balance between a good storyline and a lot of hentai(love that hentai). Keep it up.
| Reviewed By: Mr. Joy On: June 25, 2004 00:26 CDT
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Okay, this is good. You've updated at last. I admit, however, that your involvements of so many anime and manga universes has made me dizzy. I don't know who most of these people (especially the victims) are, or what series they come from, so I'm probably missing a few little in-jokes. You continue to develop your lemon theme, meaning lots more sex to come. Okay, I'll deal. My only real wish is this: since this is a "Yu-Gi-Oh!" based fanfic, I feel that not enough involvement is put on some of the other "Yu-Gi-Oh!" characters, especially the Kaiba brothers. In future chapters, could you involve them more? And also, is the Momobora tournament going to resume at some point? If you want to make this a long story, that's cool, but I feel it's starting to drag a bit in terms of chronology. Four chapters based on a single night, with no one supposedly sleeping? It's crazy. Well, I've said my peace. I now leave it to you.
| Reviewed By: Lurking Reader On: May 18, 2004 14:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
While I'm finding the fic fun, I'm having trouble keeping track of the sprawling cast you've got here. Don't suppose you could provide a short index either before or after each chapter listing the characters and which series they come from, or whether they're wholly original? Still trying to puzzle out where Katsuko is from... P.S: Looking forward to Itaimou v Asahi Samurai + Felicia (gotta thing for the catgirls), or the Card Captor crew.
| Title: Sweet!
Reviewed By: Rand [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've got this story as one of my favorites because I love it so much. You must continue writing and update a lot sooner...poor Mutsume.
| Title: Bearman
Reviewed By: Thearon On: April 18, 2004 16:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is one of the better stories i have read. But the only problem seems sofar, that the greater heros (I.E. tenchi with his light hawk wings would obliterate any opposition, and not to mention turning Ryoko loose on him that with the sailor scouts the antagonist is surely toast
| Reviewed By: Thearon On: April 18, 2004 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
| Reviewed By: Mr. Joy On: April 11, 2004 19:32 CDT
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Okay, this is getting ridiculous. I know you're probably busy with school or a job, but come on, almost two months between updates is madness. We readers want to see more, and I for one want to see how it will all resolve. Now will you please get a fucking move-on and finish the damn story already? HUH?!
| Title: Yo man!!!
Reviewed By: LegendaryDestroyerX [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 17:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo man. how ya been? i guess its been a while since i contacted u (oh and if your wonderin, i am the guy from lightdestroyerx@yahoo.com). i see that u updated your story so far(since i havent checked it for a while). so plz update me next time. and i also wish to request for u to post your on another fanfic site that desperatly needs one like yours (in my own opinion). i will email the address later to u. anyways keep up the good work, man. And plzzz do not quit writting it!!!!!!!!! Later
| Reviewed By: Mr. Joy On: February 18, 2004 18:29 CST
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Okay, thank you. I was getting worried that you had given up on the project. However, I fear that the growing lengths of your chapters may be the source of the problem, as you yourself have even observed. So perhaps shorter chapters in the future will mean more chapters posted, which means more readers to comment on them like me, and more fans when new readers take a peek at your tale. Interesting choice, making the Duel Monsters Itaimiou brough to life sentient (albeit perverse as well). I suspect a revolution ahead...Oh, and while it's not necessary, I at least would like to see a full-fledged list of all the new cards you're creating, as well as their effects (i.e. if they were real cards, how would they be described). Call it the curiosity of a devoted "Yu-Gi-Oh!" fan. If you want a suggestion for a layout, I reccommend Edo's Yu-Gi-Oh! Page for a start. Just watch out for his rules on plagiarism. So keep up the good work, update soon, and please let someone kick Itamiou's ass and have it stay kicked!
| Reviewed By: Mr. Joy On: February 10, 2004 22:24 CST
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Okay, now I'm afraid I have to get nasty. I've waited nearly two months now to see how this story continues, with no delivery! GET A FUCKING MOVE-ON!!! ...Please?
| Reviewed By: Mr. Joy On: February 08, 2004 12:45 CST
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Well, you definitely have a...unique thing going here. I confess, lemons aren't normally up my alley, but there are a few cases (such as here) where I'll make an exception. An interesting call, to have a mass conglomeration of anime characters meeting on Momobara Island (refering, of course, to chapter six). My only hope is that I (and even you) can keep track of it all. that might explain the sudden delay in updating: trying to logically write out scenarios for others characters (e.g. the Sailor Moon ladies), as well as keep things from getting boring (which, so far, it's not). It's never easy being a writer, eh? Well, you've left off on a cliffhanger (both a good and a bad idea), and I want to know what happens next. Why is Kuro so afraid of these women, when he's spent a lifetime raping others? Also, how will the rest of the tournament turn out (e.g. Joey's match against Hikaru, Kaiba's duel with Weevil, and Umi's duel with Rex)? And what's the secret of the underground labyrinth? And finally, will that silly creature Chu-Chu ever find Utena and return that "oh-so powerful Duel Monsters card" to her (what is it, by the way, that "Gold Magna Ritual" that Akira mentioned)? As you can see, I've got lots of questions, and I want answers (as any dedicated reader does). But here's my last one: who finally finishes off that sick bastard Itaimiou? I really want to know (although I'm guessing either Yugi or Utena, them being the "main" protagonists). So please, I beg you, keep us readers from going insane and finish the story!
| Reviewed By: amakakeruryunoherameki [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2003 13:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice story! I love it- nice duels and good action + suspense. Can't wait for chapter 8!
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