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| "Yu-Gi-Oh-Ji! (Prince of Games)" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] | | Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 › » ] | Title: I agree...
Reviewed By: Rey Rey On: June 19, 2008 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with Clawfang. I mean your original story was great I used to keep waiting for the next chapter to appear. It had a lot of lemons and different animes. But it also many different duels and duelists with different kinds of decks to be used. I don't know if you will be o.k. with this criticism but I hope you return this story to how u had it before.
| Title: Itamiou as Overlord (?)
Reviewed By: Navel Raider [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 18:16 CDT
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Do you know the PC game Overlord? You play as a tyrannic demon which ravishes a land. Well, some people think this game is weak... What if Itamiou was in this game, as the main character... ...and YOU could control him? Surely many people would like to use him to rape the women and kill the men. Since that it was possible to unleash the biggest secrets of the Forbidden Arts and count on mighty, heinous, lustful monsters like Tentacle Swampland Terror and Demonic Tentacle Hell, instead of a bunch of ho-hum imps... And I would also like it if it was possible to control minds.
| Reviewed By: 1.1 On: June 04, 2007 04:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice fanfic, read the old one beofre and the new one. You seriously changed it from the 1st version. It's good and all. Really liek your writing style, Just the lemon parts get carried a bit too much, well anyways! Can't wait for the other new chps to come.
| Title: Oh god...
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 13:29 CDT
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I liked the first version of this. I skipped over a few of the lemons, but overall liked the duels and the story. But this...this is a travesty. It's an insult to Yugioh and who knows how many other animes you've butchered. You've turned Anzu, and all the women, into sluts. Now, I am an Anzu fan, and Anzu Angel to be exact, and I do enjoy lemons. But this is just wrong. You're just turned the entire cast of Yugioh into a bunch of whores. And Anzu having sex with her mother? That in particular really made me heave, but in general your portrayal of her is disgusting, and as a rabid fan of her, I am appauled. You claim to like Anzu, but you don't. You like her the way a man likes a stripper or a porn star. You only like Anzu because she's attractive, you care nothing for her character, and that's just perverted, disgusting and wrong. Kazuki Takahashi would have a heart attack if he read this filth. If you're going to portray Anzu, then portray HER, not who you fantasize she is. Lemons are fine, but you need to learn how to write them. For an idea of what a lemon SHOULD be like, read "The Sweetest Gift" by Ryoko Blue, hopefully some of her talent and taste will rub off on you. It is possible to write a hot, steamy lemon without turning the participants into a bunch of lustful perverts, which is what you've done. Honestly, if you want to have any hope of salvaging this story, go to the first version. And in the future, if you want to have a bunch of attractive women have mindless sex with each other, please, do it with OCs and don't murder a good anime.
| Title: missing chapters?
Reviewed By: wondering person On: December 26, 2006 15:45 CST
Comment/Review:
1. Love your story think its AWESOME!!!! 2. Is there any reason all the chapters except for the proluge(sp?) and the explanation has been deleted? wondering. please respond as soon as you read THANKS :)
| Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 18:47 CDT
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Okay..the plot is...questionable. But there's just TOO many lemons! At most, a story should have no more than maybe 2 a chapter, and even then, that's a ton! You've got waaaaaay too many, and since a lot of the characters are OCs, some of them are hard to follow. Plus, the Duel Monsters sex stuff...again, a little much. 'Mega-Hentai' is one thing, but you're really pushing it into weirdo-sick pervert territory. So just...maybe cut down on the lemons a little. For me, at one point they just started detracting from the story. Anyhow, that aside, I do have a request for a lemon, weird as it may sound with what I just said. I want Kaiba to get some with his precious Dragon Girl.
| Title: GREAT!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Meiling fuck Syaoran On: March 03, 2006 23:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
HENTAI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I JUST _LOVE_ HENTAI!!!!!!!!!! GREAT! GREAT ! AND, WRITE MORE SYAORAN AND MEILING HAVING SEX!I JUST LOVE MEILING AND SYAORAN HAVING SEX! PLEASE!
| Title: Agreed
Reviewed By: Linkin-Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 23:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with the review from 'Actual Female' Although if this were real I would have hunted down and killed the Duel Monsters who raped Anzu (Big Anzu fan-boy). But this isn't a real life situation so it doesn't matter. This is a good story, I can't say I approve of all the raping, but well, it is hot. I want to see Mai doing it, Shojo Ai with Mai PLEASE Anzu/Mai maybe even Anzu/Yugi/Mai. That would be awesome. Later.
| Reviewed By: An actual female On: January 19, 2006 10:07 CST
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Ya know, most of those gals would have bled to death, what with the sheer amount of damage they're taking. They likely wouldn't even be able to walk, so they DEFINITELY wouldn't be getting frisky when alone in the dungeon. And without taking shedloads of hormomes, you DON'T get breast milk until AFTER giving birth. Sex don't have nuthin to do with it!
| Reviewed By: Rey Rey On: January 17, 2006 00:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A good story Yami Goku hope to see more chapters soon.
| Title: We want more Yaku Tanaka! More Téa! And more girls being kidnapped and raped!
Reviewed By: Navel Raider On: September 09, 2005 01:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this lemon series, my fave part is the kidnappings and rapes of the girls! This series made me create my harem of kidnapped videogame babes! The consensual sex scenes are cool too, althought I'm not much into shojo ai! My only complaint is the delay to upload new chapters, what makes we all wonder what big stuff he is preparing to us? My fave female chars are Téa Gardner and Yaku Tanaka. I would like to see more things of these two hotties. As for my fave males, I take Itamiou, Kuro, Koushiro, T.S.T (and its kid) and (both) Yugi (s).
| Title: Just A Suggestion...
Reviewed By: MonkeyMan Bob On: July 13, 2005 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic! Love the sex scenes! I've read chap. 14 and suddenly had an idea. why don't you make a story like Yu-Gi-Oh-Ji Side Stories? Just a suggestion. As said before Great fic!
| Reviewed By: SetRaM On: May 25, 2005 21:03 CDT
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Nice to see you updated, but you might want to work on the spelling. No offense, but I read Tenchi Muyo, and you mispelled Ayeka's name and Sanoskue Sagara's (unless it's his relation like Kenshin's is), and maybe even Ryoko's. Eh anyway I definitly liked this. I find it interesting though that you used the 4 Saint Beast from YuYu Hakusho as Duel Monster Cards. Though still this is proving to be most enjoyable. Though one small request do try and not take forever to get back to the tournament duels. It's just a bit annoying at times, plus its a bit hard to keep track of all the characters. But anyway I'm enjoying this and definitly can't wait to see what more will be happening. Wonder what will happen when it comes down to the finals and its Joey vs. Yugi or something. Eh anyway keep up the good work, and update as soon as your able to.
| Reviewed By: Mr. Joy On: November 04, 2004 05:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello. It's me again. I'll understand if you've been too busy to continue this story lately, or if it's been difficult trying to expand on it. Such are the consequences a writer faces, right? Well, that and rabid, anxious readers. Another reviewer commented that it takes time to create a story and keep it consistently enjoyable, especially if it's not the complete story in one package. So I'll repeat his message (sort of); take all the time you need to develop and continue this story. Now on a more personal note, I'll admit I'm not to crazy about ALL the XXX scenes depicted in this story, but you said yourself that this story is a, quote, "Dark, Lemon, Mega-Crossover," unquote. That's fine, but personally, I look forward to the Duels the most, and especially the original cards. I admit I'm jealous that I didn't create them myself, but I'm sure you get that a lot. Anyway, to sum up, take all the time you need and put as much emphasis on sex as you feel is necessary, but don't keep us rabid readers waiting forever. You lose potential fans and friends that way. Just a friendly warning. Good luck!
| Reviewed By: Duelist On: October 05, 2004 22:53 CDT
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Well hopefully you'll get back to the tournament duels. Cause I want to see Kaiba battle. Oh and I'm not sure if your interested or not, but those whole Shadow Realm duels. How about the next one instead of pain the person is wracked with pleasure. Thus colapssing at the end from pleausre/orgams. Eh just a suggestion.
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