| "Wait and Bleed" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: dbz27 On: July 14, 2003 00:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awesome! Awesome! Awesome! Will Frieza get his hands on Vegeta!!! More, More! The suspense is killing me! |
Reviewed By: arovak On: July 13, 2003 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent story. although i wouldnt mind some more stuff with goku in it. but anyways write soon please |
Reviewed By: Vegetas_Saiyan_Angel On: July 13, 2003 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alrite, this fic rocks! Keep up the gd work, can't w8 4 the nxt chapter 2 come out! ^_^
Oh and I love the idea of Vegeta seeing ghosts, very stylish *thumbs up* |
Reviewed By: kodachi On: July 13, 2003 05:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very original story you came up with!
I especially like the idea of Radditz and Vegeta reunited and am eternally thankful for the R/V-action you put in there(it´s my favorite couple as I´m one of the few R/V supporter!) therefor it wouldn´t bother me at all if their relationship would develope, making it a R/V-fic instead. (Just consider that for a sec... please ^-^)
Furthermore I like your style of writing. You even made the landscape-description sound interesting (loved your idea of hell)which is very hard to do and only few writer succeed in doing it.
I hope you won´t let your fans wait too long for the next part as I´m already anscious to see more of that fic.
-kodachi-
Maybe you could email me(?): clautschy@web.de |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2003 08:58 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good! Very original. I can't wait to see how this unfolds. |
Reviewed By: Christina G. On: April 04, 2003 13:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the whole thing with the ghosts. i keep wondering if they'e real. that is what will have me coming back to this fic. to see what's gonna happen next. mostly about what's happening between Vegeta and kakarot. |
Reviewed By: agent 182 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 21:34 CST
Comment/Review:
sorry about all those reviews uh my computer is stupid |
Reviewed By: agent 182 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 21:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mm, i loved it so far. Very intersting. Freiza *shudders, poor Vegeta seeing ghost and his Bulma is dead. Wah. He wants Goku thou, Freiza seemed to too, that guy . . . wierd. I really like it so i hope you continue.
Agent 182 |
Reviewed By: agent 182 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 21:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mm, i loved it so far. Very intersting. Freiza *shudders, poor Vegeta seeing ghost and his Bulma is dead. Wah. He wants Goku thou, Freiza seemed to too, that guy . . . wierd. I really like it so i hope you continue.
Agent 182 |
Reviewed By: agent 182 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 21:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mm, i loved it so far. Very intersting. Freiza *shudders, poor Vegeta seeing ghost and his Bulma is dead. Wah. He wants Goku thou, Freiza seemed to too, that guy . . . wierd. I really like it so i hope you continue.
Agent 182 |
Reviewed By: agent 182 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 21:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mm, i loved it so far. Very intersting. Freiza *shudders, poor Vegeta seeing ghost and his Bulma is dead. Wah. He wants Goku thou, Freiza seemed to too, that guy . . . wierd. I really like it so i hope you continue.
Agent 182 |
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 11:54 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like it so far. Please continue. |
