| "Lasta lalaithamin (Listen to my laughter)" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Dangerous_Angels On: May 29, 2003 12:34 CDT
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Oh la la I like this fic. It's different, I was wondering when you wrote in the story that Alexia was only half Velan, What's her other half? :) |
Reviewed By: Ria On: May 14, 2003 17:21 CDT
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Very interesting, I like the language too!
Hope you update soon! |
Reviewed By: Mina Son [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2003 20:33 CDT
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Hiya! Great chappie once again. Ya, I got to see Marai *starts drooling witha dazed like on her face.* Ya he's so great *giggles*. I hope you write mor and I'll be back soon. I'm going to go look for Marai and Trunks or anyone who knows where they are. *Looks around and spots Goten walking with Trunks, Screamis like a moron and runs towards them. Trunks sees and starts running away*
Trunks: AHhh... She's after me again. No way are you catching me this time.
Mina: *starts crying, Trunks notices and comes back pats her on the head.* I thought.....
Trunks:I'ts Okay..
Mina: *Looks up witha grin on her face and latches on to Trunks arm* Ha I've got you know... |
Reviewed By: BabyPan On: April 28, 2003 14:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like your story very much! Its really good, I hope the next chapter would be here soon!
BabyPan |
Reviewed By: Saiyan_princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2003 14:56 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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I'm really enjoying your story! Please update! Are you going to have more of the young z-warriors like ubuu, marron? I haven't seen much of them yet! |
Reviewed By: Lisa On: April 18, 2003 14:39 CDT
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*Giggles like a school girl* You updated! :) |
Reviewed By: A Trunks Lover On: April 17, 2003 17:18 CDT
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*Nods her head in agreement with Mina Son* I Love Mirai and Trunks! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Mina Son On: April 13, 2003 19:17 CDT
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I wanna see Marai.... *drools as mind goes in gutter. hitts herself on the head* Ya, back to the review, Great Chappie. hOPE MORE WILL BE ON THE WAY SOON. Oh Ya you captured there attitdes. Great Job. Keep writing, and I'll be back. *Runs off chasing Marai & Trunks with an insane look on her face.* |
Reviewed By: Mina Son On: April 12, 2003 14:05 CDT
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Great so far. Very original. Hope you have a new cahpter up soon. |
Reviewed By: Lisa On: April 11, 2003 23:53 CDT
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Hey, back again! :) Well, maybe you shouldn't use so much of the Elven Phrases. It is kinda confusing but it is kinda cool. Originality to use Elven Phrases. |
