| "dbz vacation" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: August 07, 2003 21:05 CDT
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It's good so keep writing. |
Reviewed By: Jako On: July 07, 2003 12:40 CDT
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Yes I know you have lots of fics... BUT YOU GOTTA UPDATE IM DYING HERE!!!!! *gasps for air* ....need.... update.... now!.... or....wi-ll.... DIE!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: sabrea On: July 02, 2003 19:51 CDT
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baka means fool,or idiot. |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: July 01, 2003 05:20 CDT
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This is good so keep going. |
Reviewed By: Sailor J-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2003 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! Write more soon!
'Baka' means idiot. If you mean 'last name' by 'second name', nobody knows, but I picked 'Yasai', 'cause it means 'vegetable' in Japanese, and if you scramble it, you get 'Saiya'. |
Reviewed By: Christina G. wytygr74@hotmail.com On: May 07, 2003 04:41 CDT
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Wet Saiyajin men! now there's a wet t-shirt contest i'd be happy to judge! what was Hercule watching on the galactic news? |
Reviewed By: Christina G. wytygr74@hotmail.com On: May 07, 2003 04:30 CDT
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Ah... hercule torture! Wonderful! oh yeah! just to let you know. we in the states call it cokes as long as it is the Coka Cola brand. pop is another term and soda of course. |
Reviewed By: Christina G. wytygr74@hotmail.com On: May 07, 2003 04:14 CDT
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oh great! just what we needed! Hercule out in space making Earth and humans look bad! |
Reviewed By: Christina G. wytygr74@hotmail.com On: May 07, 2003 04:07 CDT
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Poor Veg. He can't be left alone. it seems everybody wants to write a torture Veggie fic. they got all the info from him on the planets and they won't even let him pick a place to go?!?1 that's not fair! but with Chi & Bulma; not much is for our lovable prince. |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2003 17:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeah wet saiyjins,mmmmm vegeta.....one hell of a wet t-shirt contest! lol This is a really great fic so far! I really enjoy reading it^_^
Also what the hell is that stupid idiot hercule watching! [I hate his guts + I DETEST yamcha] [fags the both of em] lol! hurry up witht he next chapter! PEAS?! |
Reviewed By: Sailor J-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2003 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHA that was funny. Keep it up! |
