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| "Shikon No Yu-Tri High" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: AmyAnderson45 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 00:04 CDT
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If you feel skeptical about your characters why don't you add more to them then just name, age, sex, and personality. What about desires/goals? Do you characters want something more than anything in the world? What about strenghts, virtues, faults, and weaknesses? What are their major flaws? What do they like or dislike? You don't have to explain everything but if you want your audience to be familiar with the character then try it. It's a good thing that you have started on the character profiles because now you can have a specific way of how to portray them in your fanfiction. Good luck with your story! | Reviewed By: trapt_tears On: July 13, 2003 20:43 CDT
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i cant really rate it b/c all that was really there was the character profiles, but i can spill my mind on the topic all over this paper. and trust me i can make a mess!
*i think you should seriously continue! idk if you are or if ur against it or any thing, but by the looks of it you have a huge aray of different characters, froam a large range of anime. some of the ppl i know, but some i dont. that makes it interesting. and seeing Vash the Stampede in the same game as Sqaull Leonheart and Cloud Strife catches my intrest and by the way this sounds, you might really be able to hold it 'til the end! school sucks, but w/ and interesting buch of characters like this (some being born from demons, blitz ball player, garden students, SOLDER drop out, etc.)this sounds like a blast!! |
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