Reviewed By: Evie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2003 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
There's lots that needs explaining, the fic goes too fast, and I could go on and on. In a nutshell, I think that it needs a rewrite and a definite tune-up. |
