| "Can I Tell Them?" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Jeshone On: May 14, 2003 12:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
what would a toon jinzo look like. Would it be sad looking and lame or just plain creepy. Would the transformation make it chibi. One thing for sure that is one toon card that could give Mokuba nightmares for the rest of his life. |
Reviewed By: Jeshone On: May 14, 2003 12:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
While it is a shame your ending that thread but still you did great work and this part of the story was incredible and was a great way to tie everything together. Although it would have been cool to see Jou use his dad's cards in a duel. it would have been hilarious to see a toon flameswordsman or a toon red eyes black dragon, but it was a great story none the less. |
Reviewed By: sailor moon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2003 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fanfic, due to the fact that not ony was it well written, but it touches up o important issues. I thnk yu dd a great job and wil do well in other stories. |
