| "Gathering Feathers" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
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Reviewed By: Amy-Chan On: February 08, 2004 13:46 CST
Comment/Review:
whats a fanfic without tohru?????????????????????????? *-*
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Reviewed By: Brianna On: June 18, 2003 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! You updated real quick! This chapter is almost as good as the first one, and we've got another cliffhanger. You asked for ideas for chapter 3, but (despite what you seem to think) I don't think anyone could do as good a job shaping this story as you are. This story totally rocks, and update real soon, okay? Oh, and don't bother doing chapter 2 over again, it's fine (but that's just me wanting to read ch.3 as soon as possible).
Can't wait for your next update! |
Reviewed By: Brianna On: June 17, 2003 12:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aside from "Sentium", this is my fave fic on this site. It's totally original and the fact that everybody's OOC is really refreshing. That first chapter was a real cliffhanger and I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon! |
