| "Walking the Edge" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Ryoko69 On: April 03, 2004 11:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your work!!! For some reason I just can't seem to wait for the next chapter. How knows, maybe when your done you'd like to submit it to my website: www.freewebs.com/toy_menace Well gotta go, My girl friend is calling Bye!!
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Reviewed By: KatdaKit On: January 02, 2004 02:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying the fic and I hope you keep on writing. Usually, I don't like any outside character inserts, but this one is actually good! Also, I enjoyed the fact that the 'American' is into trickery. Love the fic, you won't lose my attention.
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Reviewed By: Razoru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 18:03 CST
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That is sooo good! Oh... And as for the whole lesbian thing... *sticks up thumbs* ((As you can tell, I'm a guy)) Good work! And keep writing!
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Reviewed By: MetalKeiya [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2003 19:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I... uh... have a certain liking(though not like the one where girls drool endlessly over bishounens) to Motoko... and... uh... I... uh... I... gah, forget it. Nice fic, though. Beats the Ranma/LH fusion that most writers do. Horror and Supernatural aren't my cup a' tea, though...
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Reviewed By: HotFieryPants [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2003 18:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Personaly I loved the plot. I gave the enjoyment factor a 9 because in the begining it was a little slow but I still couldn't stop reading. I also feel that there isn't enough to do with Shinobu, Su, Naru and Keitaro(sorry I don't want to be harsh). But I do love this fanfic.
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Reviewed By: Grand_Crusader [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 12:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well...I've been waiting for this update. Thank GODDESS you put this on MediaMiner, 'cause I really would rather stay as far away as humanly possible from FFNet... Anywho, great job, the story line is a cut above the rest (The were thing was a bit of a shocker, but since this ain't dark, I'm really rather happy to see it, as it sets you apart from the other Author Created Characters and the SIs.) and you aren't really interferring with the canon pairings which is also a plus. So, keep writing, you certainly won't lose my interest;)
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Reviewed By: DigitalAvatar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 00:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looks okay, it's an enjoyable read so far. I must say I particularly enjoyed the duel with Motoko; Won by 'trickery' instead of open combat. Re: 'Poll', I'd say definitely stick with the tradional views of Motoko. The supernatural stuff is okay as it is, even though I'd tend towards going light on it, it's all good if it advances the story. Keep it flowing! ;D
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Reviewed By: Ominae_Yu On: September 23, 2003 21:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thinks this is a great fic. and dont change anything because its great as it is.
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Reviewed By: leigh On: July 22, 2003 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think ur fic is cool, I'm ok with the lesbian thing, but PLEASE, PLEASE, do not make motoko one! Maybe u can guess from my title that motoko an I have things in common and I will be sorely vexed if anything *shudders* how shall I say . . . troubling occurs. You have been warned! I sincerely hope that you consider my "suggestion" lest there are reprocussions.*twitch* |
