| "Da Luau: Where anything happens!" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nahaujaret [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 12:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you are an amazing writer. I usually don't enjoy a crossover of so many animes, but you did it pretty damn well. I just hope to see a new fanfic soon. You are definitely one of my favs.
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Reviewed By: krissy On: July 27, 2003 16:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is some funny shit!!i luv it,u got 2 write some more fics. |
Reviewed By: krissy On: July 27, 2003 15:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like u'r story so far,i think it is pretty funny,keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 09:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story was funny! I really liked it a lot. Except for the ending, that was kinda sad. Anyway, I think you should continue the story a little longer, I mean, what's with flame's past? I wanna know, even if it doesn't really have much to do with the story. Anyway, I'm going to go now, bye! Oh, and thanks for reading and reviewing my story, I'm glad you likes it! I updated it a few days ago if you want to go check it out. |
Reviewed By: AngelWings [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2003 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the GREATEST fic ever!!! I enjoyed every part. It made me laugh, cry, and laugh some more. Dont worry about what Morro said. Your fic was good right to the very end. I wish I could be in it. (hint hint) PLeaseeee write more!!! I'll be waiting... but dont take to long
A greatful reader and writer,
AngelWings
aka
Serenity ^_^ |
Reviewed By: sessieluv2 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 22:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
I liked your fanfic,it was really nice. |
Reviewed By: Sailor Dark [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 12:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sailor Dark: Cool Kurama's clothes. Heh heh (steals clothes.)
Niko:(smacks Sailor Dark.)
Sailor Dark: What are you doing here?
Niko: To steal Hiei's cloths. (steals his clothes.)
Both: (Are stealing Sesshomaru's clothes.)
Sailor Dark: I love you Kurama!!!
Niko: I love you Hiei!!!
Both: We love you Sesshomaru!!! (Both runs off carrying clothes.) |
Reviewed By: Morro On: July 06, 2003 15:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoied the first chapter, but the rest were horrible, i'm sorry! If you had written the rest of this like the first then i believe it might have been more enjoyable. Please try something else with other anime characers... just not so rude! |
Reviewed By: Morro On: July 06, 2003 15:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoied the first chapter, but the rest were horrible, i'm sorry! If you had written the rest of this like the first then i believe it might have been more enjoyable. Please try something else with other anime characers... just not so rude! |
Reviewed By: Dustyfey [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 14:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
it gets a little hard to understandwho is talking at times bu other thatn that it is a really funny fic. please keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Sailor Dark [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 12:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
I am the number one Kurama fan and have a piece of his hair to prove it that I found in his trash. I looooooooovvvvvveeeeee yoooooooooouuuuuu Kurama!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Andy On: June 30, 2003 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story you have to continue this fiction. I can't wait to see what is happening in the poker room. |
Reviewed By: Andy On: June 30, 2003 22:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really great. You have to continue this fiction. I just can't wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: Ookami On: June 30, 2003 02:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you are doing a good job of writing this fic and you have done a much better job of spelling than most fanfic authors do. It is a very original piece and I find it very amusing! Please...continue writing this fic...i am looking forward to what happened with strip poker and some of my favorite characters not yet mentioned! |
Reviewed By: Starry Eyes On: June 29, 2003 23:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon! |
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