| "Do You Trust Me?" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: BIMBO N DITZ On: February 09, 2004 08:45 CST
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the ending was gud btw it wernt bad at all ha ha ha yamcha gt everything he deserved shame he didnt die tho lol he he he eh eh he byeeeee
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Reviewed By: bimbo n ditz On: February 09, 2004 08:43 CST
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oh great work!!!! awwww its a shame u not writin dbz nemore bt dont matters. plz plz try tho coz ur fics rock!!!! bye byez and good work!!!! SURFS UP!
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Reviewed By: bimbo an ditz On: January 14, 2004 05:03 CST
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plz plz plz update this fic soon!!!!!! tnks!!!! bye byez!
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Reviewed By: bimbo an ditz On: October 29, 2003 09:11 CST
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y r u not updatin!!!! this fic rocks!!!!!!!!! plz plz plz update soon cheerz! also if u aint gonna update ne more could u plz email us on bimbo_ditz@yahoo.co.uk thanks again!! and good luck wiv the fics bye byez
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Reviewed By: bimbo _ditz On: October 02, 2003 04:20 CDT
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update soon plz thanks this rocks
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Title: gr8 work!!!
Reviewed By: bimbo_ditz On: September 08, 2003 09:06 CDT
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this fic is gr8!!! soz we havnt read sooner but we bin on vacation in the sun lol we had great fun surfin!!!! lol pleasse update soon!!! hope bulma forvives v soon!!!!! bye byez |
Reviewed By: bimbo and ditz On: August 19, 2003 10:05 CDT
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please please update this fic soon!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) :) :0) pleassssseeeeeeeeeeeeee i hope vegeta get revenge!!! he he gta go bye byez |
Reviewed By: bimboand ditz On: July 31, 2003 09:03 CDT
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pleasssseeeeeeeeeeeee update soon!!!!!!! this fic rocks!!!!!!!!!!!!"!! we want to see yamcha dead and bulma happy!!!!!!! and Vegeta happy to!!!!!!!! lol! gg bye byez! and kepp up the gud work! |
Reviewed By: GMP Wolf On: July 25, 2003 21:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I figure if you're going to write a B/V relationship fic you've got Creativity right there. I also like a style of writing that makes sence none of that Old English crap or too many big words, but also not preschool junk, and finally descriptive language gets on my nerves because it takes all day to read. Enjoyment is very high because I HATE Yamcha his name should be Yamchump. In the story Yamcha's character is very good because his bastardness and plot are of only creativity of the author. Overall THIS STORY RULES! ^^ CONGRATES BECAUSE I DON'T LIKE EVERY FIC I READ! MUCH LOVE GMP Wolf |
Reviewed By: bimbo and ditz [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 03:38 CDT
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this fic is gr888!!!!!!! please update soon! we luv it!!! poor vegeta!!!! hope that he get revenge on that stupid yamcha- we hate him soooooooooo much!!!!! lol! hope that B/V can get togetha soon! and if you have any spare time u could always r/r our fics just click on our pen name and u should b able to read them! please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! bye byez!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Laina On: July 18, 2003 17:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please upate really soon! I hope Vegeta gets to beat the crap out of Yamcha later in he story. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: smilieface On: August 06, 2003 14:18 CDT
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ur fic is soooooooo gud u av 2 upd8 asap plezzzz =0) plzzzzzzzz or ill hav 2 h8 u 4 eva n eva den die n u don't want dat on ur concionce du u so review cheers ps jokes dont wanna scare u 2 much now du i lol |
