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| "Waking Ami" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: ordieth117 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 15:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story so much! Such a tragic romance. It was beautiful. Thank you!
| Reviewed By: Skeletor Babe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a wonderfully written story. I enjoyed it so very much. You are an amazing writer, and I love the way you peiced everything together. Keep writing, I hope to see some more works from you in the future.
| Title: and now, a second look.
Reviewed By: jcmver2oo4 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2004 18:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Ok, now that the fire's (mostly) gone, I can see some of the things you said. You left some huge, gaping plot holes. To put it short, you left Berril, Jaedyte, Fiore, The Senshi theme, and even Ami herself up in the air. Which gives you a lot of sequel and spinoff oportunities right there if you want. My old scores stay.
| Title: No words...
Reviewed By: jcmver2oo4 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2004 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I seriously have to start with the technicalities, or I'll never tackle them. 1st, this was a very well written story. Wait, erase that. This was a professionally written story. Most of the emotions were carried over in a way I only wish to do. Sometimes, I noticed that a certain expression, narration or dialogue was kinda out of place, but very minor stuff. The biggest offender in this was some (sometimes very nasty) mispellings, but that's nitpick compared to all the good things you did chapter after chapter. Speaking of which, you really wrote a lot. Those chapters could be broken up in 3 or 4 smaller chapters easy. Not that I'm complaining. The way you tackled the romance, homosexuality, and sexual matters in the "Sailor Moon" Universe without being offensive or going overboard to the NC-17 rating really astonished and puzzled me. Lesbian love, curse words, and sexual themes on "Sailor Moon", and I'm not urged to hit the back button? You really did something there. Now, with that outta the way, I gotta say: this is one of the most beautiful, inspirational stories I have ever read. Ever. I've never felt so emotional about a story since "Como Agua Para Chocolate" (Like water for chocolate). Also, I've never shed a tear before in any story, EVER. To give you a prespective, when I watched "Titianic" for the first time, everybody on the room was crying except me. Nothing, not even a feeling for that Jack dude. Here, I felt a whirlwind of emotions, but mostly surprise, overjoy, and sadness, through the entire story. The way that you ended it was just perfect. I still feel a tingle and some teary eyes (seriously) whenever those final moments flash through my head. In all, I just cannot recommend this story enough to those who are yet to read it. 4 thumbs up. And you might be wondering the less-than-perfect scores. well, getting straight 10's from me is hard work (not even Takeuchi-sensei has that honor). Still, This is a wonderful story that no one should miss. Heck, not even the Sailor Moon transformation and attack segments wear on. I look forward to more of your fantasies (in a good way), pinapoe. Reviwed by JCM
| Title: Ever faithful reader since Waking Mercury
Reviewed By: Ayrki On: February 25, 2004 01:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Somedays, it feels as though I have been reading your work forever. And with this last chapter, thus ends yet another of the greatest Bishoujo Senshi Sailormoon works of fiction out in the abyss of cyberspace. We've laughed and cried, mourned and celebrated with the cheracters as they lived. We shook our fists at the injustice of their fates, and felt the saddness just as they when facing yet another trial. Though we shall go on to read other works, this is one that shall remain in our minds, be it forefront or back. Like all great works, this is one of those that will influence those of us who go on to write. We may not consciously be aware of drawing upon your work as inspiration, but we shall, and that which we produce will be an unnamed tribute to this magnificent tale you have woven and shared with us. And in the dark moments when we can write no more, we shall remember this and find the words to continue on with our own tales. Thank you. Words can never express how much it means that you have chosen to share your tale with us. It has been extraordinary, and one I'll always remember. I look forward to the sequel.
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