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| "The Story; An Anime Tale with a Twist" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: TendoAkane On: August 08, 2003 15:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! go us! i think it rules! i love stories about me...hehe thanks for giving me some credit for the story, since i did help you with parts of it, and it was my fault in the first place...hehe hmn...maybe i should put my story on here once it's done, what'da'you think?
i enjoyed the story very much, i thought it was great, ryoga is hot, i am akane, and i think that the story rules. that is all | Reviewed By: Grand_Crusader [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2003 13:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
0_0 Wow. Except for a few minor misspellings, the whole series is great. A little short, though, and the ending seemed forced compared to the way you started the series.
One thing that could be expanded upon (or written up as an omake-esque piece) would be what happened with the Nerima Wrecking Crewmembers post-Chapter 3 (Specifically, Kodachi, Ukyo, Shampoo, and Mousse). I do understand that you wrote this story as a(n excellent) self-insert with a focus on Ranma, Akane, and Ryoga, but you did cross paths with the rest of the mainline characters from the series and left those of us who enjoy the antics of the entire cast, not just the headliner, wondering "Whaaaaaaaa?".
Excellent use of the crossovers as well^-^
Seriously, though, if any fics you have or will have written are this good, you've got yourselves a fan. |
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