"Fumbling Towards Ecstacy" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: deunan On: August 04, 2003 05:43 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was definitely a ten. Grammar, style,
enjoyment, execution - all great.
Elegantly paced, restrained use of words.
Lovely vignette.
I definitely liked all the "Are you sure?"'s.
It may be OOC, but it's a nice thing for humans
to do. And I like to see them being good to
each other.
Loved the angst - wasn't overpowering, but
I felt it running through the whole story.
I didn't really understand the references
to Yohji's trepidation about sleeping with
a man until he mentioned that it was his
first time with one. | Reviewed By: Pandora.81 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2003 10:29 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I just agree with Morgana-chan's ratings. ^^
This is so darn great!!! Honto ni! I really love it. ^_^
Hmm, the Schu/Yotan angst and lime goodness... Thank you very, very much. *sniffles*
Hehe, and I'm glad to see what's about your other fictions since I'm always looking forward to reading more of your stories. ^^ | Reviewed By: Fata Morgana On: August 03, 2003 04:42 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Weeee.... you posted it... and I'm sure Pandora would love it as much as I did, Oh Yeah! say Hi to your muse too *wink at your muse and gotten smack by mine* |
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